Her Father's Junk

She piled it up in heaps and mounds
and hurled it all into a skip -
his things were gone, the house was clear.
I saw a trembling bottom lip...
 
written 19th March for Constance's J for Junk contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ashley Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Aww, Jack, such a poignant scene spills from your potent pen. You’ve captured a mix of tender emotions with this beautifully packaged poem. Your empathy shines through in the power of your poetic finesse. Warmest wishes, my wonderful friend .. ~Susan
Horsman Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Wow, Jack, love this intriguing poem, can see more than one scenario here, clever stuff, love it.
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:26 AM
This is sad Jack. Sounds like finally removing the belongings of a loved one after his passing. Nice job. Good imagery. God Bless, JB
La France Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 6:57 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful ~Constance
Alex Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 10:04 PM
Sentiments filled junks cannot be, perhaps, easily thrown away. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Proxenos Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 8:34 AM
It happened to us, my father in law came every weekend to stay with us, so we decided it best that he left his little empire of flats and shops behind and the family would run his business, so he came with a trailer filled with everything bar the kitchen sink. He had his own little flatlet at the end of our house, so he could feel independent. We sorted junk from good, but were not in his good books for quite a while after that. Things came right - love your poem a fave! Hugs, Jen.
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 5:15 PM
Sad. I can imagine how hard that would be on any person having to do that with their parent/s worldly possessions. I did not have to do that with my parents. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 3:18 PM
oh I really relate to this one, Jack. I hate it when Joe makes me throw my things away. For me they are NOT junk, but almost all my stuff is junk to him. Love this.
Maverick Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Tender yet evocative, well conveyed Jack I note as have those below; the tight frame You have employed, which gives it real power I feel we are picking up on the times we have Read so much In a glance in someone's eyes A real lot can be seen, multiply this billions Of times as it happens worldwide... And it Becomes a write enormous in complexity and Empathy.'
Shaw Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 10:35 AM
Such poignancy in matter of a few words that said it all, nice one Jack . . . : )
Alex Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 9:17 AM
My God! Great!
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