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Her Change of Heart

Deep in your eyes when my gaze flies i feel, Sometimes rain sometimes a river speaking. Sometimes a night whispers something so still, And feel someone a man like me seeking. Over the years some of the stars faded. Some of the doors meant to open stood shut. Some hope and dreams lay by the streams jaded. words that I bled screamed in her head, oh but ! The trees and wind tells me, "rescind, move on". Memory pearls can't be hurled callously, oh How can I, pierce a sad sky forlorn. She's moonlight green gentle valley breezy. Now She's a dove, clouds way above my soul, flowers on dirt, her change of heart, will call. (01.12.2022)

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Date: 1/23/2022 1:01:00 PM
Lovely Marshall ! Debx
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Date: 1/15/2022 1:46:00 PM
it is a torture for sure, beautiful imagery! Well done, Grace D
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Date: 1/12/2022 11:05:00 PM
"Now she is a dove, clouds way above my soul"... it tells and tells it all... the agony of a lovelorn heart ! !
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Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/14/2022 8:31:00 AM
Yes, my Dear Poet extraordinaire ! Thank you.
Date: 1/12/2022 3:12:00 PM
Beautifully and poetically said Marshall. God Bless, JB
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Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/14/2022 8:26:00 AM
Many thanks, Dear Poet JB.
Date: 1/12/2022 11:49:00 AM
Superb sonnet effort; the Italian originators highlighted your theme: Love in all its guises. Salaam Poet
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Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/14/2022 8:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind comment! Salaam to you too Poet

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