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Her Broken Heart

His heart was open…his allegiance to her was true! One day, he was murdered,and she felt as an icicle, all blue. How could she bring his souls song back? He died of a horrible..sudden, heart attack! She didn’t know how to live a day without him. But in memories lane…she dreamt about him! About all the great times and conversations they had together. And now she stood alone …..in winter’s lonely, snowy.weather. 1/28/2025

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Date: 2/19/2025 2:41:00 AM
I just lost my niece to a stroke at 35. not the same as losing a soulmate. but the grief is still the same Nice poem hope to see more. Not so depressing of course
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/19/2025 2:39:00 PM
Fenneth, i rep,ied to your poem aboyr tour nies, mt condoleves, oh, hoe sad, soup mail me anytime, my hisband died at forty and It was hard to accept. Expecially in my pdtfu that is a common themes when he was 4O. I never remarried, he was a writer and a big influence on me ….being my own person..I write here how I think is true ! This has cost me friends., too bad, they want me to think like them, and I won’t, never, I am not a puppy dog to please other poets, be you.,be honest. Love, Pangie xx
Date: 2/10/2025 11:27:00 AM
It's an empty feeling - so glad so many are able to grieve past it and have a memorable life. Nice write dear friend. :)
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Date: 2/19/2025 1:39:00 PM
Yesm mwe lve pst it, I domt know how! But beluef in God, friends and relatbes help. Agter my Dad dies, I attended a Grief support group. You get to hear others stories, you get to crt. Other people do not fet your pain, one day a neighbor came by, londa #*2 held me in her arms and she was a help. I cried for half an hour. Wow.love Pangie x
Date: 2/8/2025 6:28:00 PM
So many of us stand alone …..in winter’s lonely, snowy.weather, when losing a soul mate. Enjoyed my friend
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Date: 2/8/2025 9:22:00 PM
Hello Eve, nice of you to visit.i did paint a lyrical like poem. And so dramatic “And now she stood alone the road to life was now wide alone?”Simply meant the that to life was now wide open… it was a challenge to go ahead on my own, i never realized the huge contribution I made to peoples lives.! Prefer to give in the real world! All worked out,i could write a book, but I don’t have the patience or the energy. I was thinking tonight when I was walking down the street in San Francisco and ran into Dick Van Dyke and talked to him. He was awesome. I am not afraid to talk to anyone. I also talked to groups of 300! I will try and read you tomorrow. I am really tired tonight.. Love you, Pangie xx
Date: 2/8/2025 5:10:00 PM
This is very sad. It's beautiful though. It seems you know about loss.
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Date: 2/8/2025 8:58:00 PM
Ah, Pige.loss makes us grow.. yes it i..not really comfortable. But mooning over loss keeps the doors locked to new loves!..i sense the sadness.. life is for the living and joy and new challenges and loves..I learned pangie cxto let go of the past. and liveda great life ..far beyond my expectations , I was engaged three times after that.!! But I really enjoy the single life.. its been beyond awesome! Pangie cx
Date: 2/3/2025 11:03:00 AM
What a write. This just happened to my friend. He dropped in front of her. (Not murdered, just died.) Her birthday was 4 days latter. Have a great/blessed day..............................
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Date: 2/3/2025 5:47:00 PM
Dear Paula, so sorry to hear this tragic tale. When I was in nursing school, I was taking care of a male patient in bed. He was an elderly man, and he suddenly stopped breathing. Terrible experience for someone that’s not your friend. I took care of them often, so I felt really bad. Then I had to wrap and and a sheet and take the body down to the more that was so horrible. I hope that never happens to me or you or anyone here. I wish your friend, love and peace. It will take time to will take time to get over it.. I haven’t been around. I apologize.1 need time to be quiet. Pangie xx
Date: 1/30/2025 3:52:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, this is a very sad poem. She is sad to lose her special man in death. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/31/2025 9:42:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes this happens anywhere to anybody. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
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Date: 1/30/2025 4:23:00 PM
It happens to often, Darlene …in all cities and countries. Hugs, beloved friend Pangie xx!
Date: 1/30/2025 6:59:00 AM
Hi Pangie, I can feel her pain, to have someone you love murdered must be soul destroying. xx
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Date: 1/30/2025 4:19:00 PM
It was fiction….but I would not understand how anyone could outlive such a tangible loss of a deare one! Merci, Pangie xoxo
Date: 1/29/2025 12:02:00 PM
And she felt as an icicle ....wow from a child perspective it radiates feelings of truth in sadness. Chantelle xoxo
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Date: 1/29/2025 1:13:00 PM
Chantelle, sweet friend God be with you, . this is a great analogy you brought up of the popsicle.. They are indeed cold.. I explained this was, but it was based on reality.. Montgomery county county auditor it actually happened to a cousin of mine.. I love you! Pangie xxoo
Date: 1/29/2025 5:52:00 AM
Pangie you've written quite a sad poem that I could imagine seeing in a person with mournful body language; Your write can be seen in a sad person; well done!
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Date: 1/29/2025 10:58:00 AM
Dearest David! The reply to Tom tells the actual story. Some people overcome tragedy. I was thinking of a man with family. All six of them went over the side of the mountain and died. I don’t know how he ever maintained his sanity, but he did and was never walking around with a long face. He was a lovely person with interest and more than himself.. I fselfish people who can only think of themselves.. they runaround e bot their own ego….harming others, and don’t care about anyone but theoir own ego.Yikes Glad I know you David. Love, Pangie xoxo Anyway, David, thank you, and hope you have a good day riding. You have a genuine streak of goodness. Hugs, pangiex of goodness.
Date: 1/29/2025 2:45:00 AM
Quite a sad verse Pangie, it's something that she'll never get over. Tom
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Date: 1/29/2025 10:50:00 AM
Hello, Tom! Yes, a sad one, to be sure, my cousins daughter was off to work. She kissed him goodbye, heard a loud bang, he went outside and there he was dead , on the grass. it was by mistake., it was a hit by gangsters. They went to the wrong address.. she remarried, add more children and live a wonderful life.. I hope that makes you feel better..Love.Pangie xxoo Dead
Date: 1/28/2025 7:23:00 PM
Lives of such women I have seen.So sad. Very nicely penned .
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Date: 1/29/2025 10:41:00 AM
I havvee known women whose husbands who were killed.. but they regained happiness! Amazing))) you make me happy to tellme, it was micely penned In appreciation~ Pangie
Date: 1/28/2025 4:12:00 PM
Such a sad though beautifully poem Pangie, pleased to read that it isn’t true though. Love Beryl xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/29/2025 10:35:00 AM
Me, Too! Not real! I do feel sorry for women like this. Appreciate you reading me, Beryl. Thank you.much. Pangie.xoxo with hugs and Love.
Date: 1/28/2025 12:51:00 PM
Aww Pangie what a beautifully sad poem about love lost! Is it about you my friend? Debx
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Date: 1/28/2025 2:57:00 PM
Oh l am glad its not you FOF!!….l do know you had a deep special love with your husband so thought maybe it was! I am grand my friend and hope you are also! Debx
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Date: 1/28/2025 2:04:00 PM
Oh, my. I made up this poem!! I trust you enough by now, I would tell you anything personal in soup mail. Glad it is not me! Hope you are well. Dear friend, thank you for reading me… FOF……Pangie x x

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