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Her Eyes

HER EYES An ocean may be filled with gems arrayed - With swaying jewels priceless and unique; Her eyes provide the finest true display - The only one I wish my eyes to seek. The brightest diamonds turn each warming ray Sent from the sun to shattered shards of light. They have no warmth - their faultless facets play And split to shreds the heart of sun so bright. Are emeralds - those succulent green grapes In bunches glazed and frozen - ever pressed Into the flowing wine with fluid shapes Of sad or happy tears when soft-caressed? Her water-pearls at evening darkly shimm’ring, Slow glow with morning satisfaction whole, That lustre in the embers gently simm’ring To widening oriel circles of her soul : Warm, gentle, wet, as wavelets on the shore Caress my soul and linger ever more. ............................................................................................. Note This is not a normal sonnet with 14 lines, but a kind of "uber sonnet" with 18 lines and two voltas....called a heroic sonnet.

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Date: 9/13/2014 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win, Sidney
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Date: 9/13/2014 6:48:00 AM
I like it! grats on your contest win ;)
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem Sidney.
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Date: 9/12/2014 2:01:00 PM
Sidney, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest. Enjoy my newest blog "A Senior Moment" if you'd like. LOVE LINDA
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