Her

her heart torn knowing her next move would change history posted on July 29, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2018 5:08:00 PM

How did Mark know this had to do with a guy forgetting a birthday? I thought it was about a famous woman in history or something like that!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2018 7:14:00 PM

LOL - it's not related but that's funny.

Mark Toney

Date: 7/29/2018 1:28:00 PM

Lol... Just because he forgot her birthday? Forgive me, Line. I read "The Sting" first before I read this one :) In all seriousness, it's amazing the amount of emotion that can be contained in ten short words. Very powerful.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2018 4:56:00 PM

Thanks, Mark for your visit - a husband forgetting a birthday is hard to take for any woman who caters to her hubby all year round... Not that I'm saying it happened to me...