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Henry's Visit

Henry* came to visit us And even stayed the night! The hours that we spent with him – An absolute delight. The house was primed for safety; The milk, of course, organic. Our drive was smooth; no ticks showed up And thus, no cause for panic. But oh, what fun exploring! The pillow paths and towers! The store, the playground and the pool, The watering of flowers. His dad’s old games and toys and books Were there, like pirates’ treasure, While music (some on tape!) was played, Which added to our pleasure. The giggles and excitement Proved the visit a success But, “Can I come back next Tuesday?” Was my favorite, I confess. *my not-quite 4-year-old grandson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/28/2017 4:13:00 PM
A delightful description of a grandson with grandparents! / M
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Date: 6/21/2017 11:12:00 PM
Grandma and Grandson are both very lucky. Wonderful poem with truly, rhythmic rhyme.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/22/2017 5:56:00 PM
as always, i am delighted to have you comment on my poem, robert. thanks for your constant support...
Date: 6/21/2017 7:30:00 PM
Crossin' my fingers, ilene! one daughter just married...the other 9wks! always sounds just magical!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/22/2017 5:55:00 PM
it's better than i ever thought it would be, james! i hope to be able to read some of your poems on the subject in the future...
Date: 6/21/2017 5:13:00 PM
Oh i think a fabulous time was had by all... i never had grandparents and feel i missed out so much as a child.I think we will be seeing a lot more poems about Henry's visits.. can i come back on Tuesday... brought a lump to my throat hugs Jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/22/2017 5:52:00 PM
hey jan! your comment really made me feel good. by the way, the feeling is mutual - if we ever got to meet, i'm sure we'd be really good friends...
Date: 6/21/2017 4:56:00 PM
Ilene, I just so enjoy reading your poetry. Your are such a talented rhyming poet. This was adorable. I could picture everything you expressed in this. What a joy. :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/22/2017 4:34:00 PM
much appreciated, chris! it was really hard to convey how wonderful the experience was for me, but you've made me feel like it did come across in my words. thank you for that...
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Chris Green
Date: 6/21/2017 5:19:00 PM
What am I, chopped liver? :) Juuuuuuuuust kidding.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2017 5:05:00 PM
As soon as I see Ilene has posted a poem I know I am I for a treat... if I ever get to the US she is one person I would so love to meet:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/21/2017 4:55:00 PM
Your poems are a must read for me Mrs Ilene. I envy your rhyming skills:)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/22/2017 4:32:00 PM
thank you so much, daniel! that's music to my ears...

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