Helpless

I sit and watch as the sadness seeps into the face before me

Watching with growing desperation as the face slowly crumples like tissue

Feel the aching in my heart as the eyes start to redden

Seeing the tears well up in the sockets until with a sob they overflow

Spilling out onto the cheeks leaving streaks in the dirt

As they course down the face of utter despair

Washing over the quivering lips from which escapes yet more sobbing

Falling like raindrops from the chin to splash upon the floor

My hearts aches and breaks

And I want to reach out and cuddle and comfort the tortured soul before me

Helplessly I find I can offer no solace

I turn my back with a heavy heart








And walk away from the mirror


Kriss Lee ( CLiPiCs ) 27/08/09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/8/2011 3:00:00 PM
sad write, sigh...Light 7 love
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:02:00 PM
Thank you all for your kind words I am quite honoured that you like my ramblings :-) Love 'N' Laughter CLiPiCs
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Kriss. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:51:00 PM
The words you have employed are collectively quite descriptive.
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:51:00 PM
Cute lovely soft expressions of being helpless, Kriss
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