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Cat outside, bitter cold, swirling snow emitting silent wails; mute through glass. David tries to open door; he can't. Tricube Poetry Contest; placed 3rd Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick Date written: 27th January 2023

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Date: 2/1/2023 4:28:00 AM
I feel sorry for the cat ! Its pathetic state is beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your win, dear Terry!
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/2/2023 2:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa
Date: 1/31/2023 6:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem -
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/2/2023 2:17:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/30/2023 4:57:00 AM
A vivid picture with few words ... nice job, Sara's very correct for rewarding you.
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/2/2023 2:18:00 AM
Thank you for those kind words David, have a great day!
Date: 1/29/2023 8:59:00 PM
Great story. Beautiful. Congratulations
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/30/2023 1:53:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/29/2023 12:40:00 PM
Thanks for sharing and for participating in my contest. I thought there has to be a solution, open a window. Sara
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/30/2023 1:54:00 AM
Thank you, Sara, for your kind comments, on the placement and for running the contest; it was a joy to enter.
Date: 1/29/2023 8:27:00 AM
Oh no! Poor kitty. Congratulations on your win Terry!
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/30/2023 1:54:00 AM
Thank you, Linda

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