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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

August has slipped away and so too did Summer’s heat, as cool fall breezes and Autumn arrived on the scene to start painting the dying leaves crimson and scarlet, a magical way to say, hello September. (Yalto) 9/13/2021 HELLO SEPTEMBER Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/14/2021 2:36:00 PM

Love this yalto, Emile:-) Such wonderful imagery and flow! Best of luck in Mystic's contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/15/2021 7:09:00 AM

Thanks, Edward, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Gary Radice

Date: 9/14/2021 2:07:00 AM

Imagery at its finest. I love the personification of Autumn painting the leaves. What is it about the season that brings out the best in poetic descriptions? Great read and a very interesting form that I'm going to take a closer look at. Cheers - Gary

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/14/2021 8:22:00 AM

Thanks, Gary, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Avery Won

Date: 9/13/2021 9:50:00 AM

I like this form :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/13/2021 1:37:00 PM

Thanks, Avery, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.