Hello Pumpkin

“Hello Pumpkin! You’re gourd-geous
in your striped orange number!” *

Just boo-tiful!

Witch is why, I want to take you to my home.”

“I’d rather patch things up here,” she says.

He takes her home, cuts, depulps and carves
her. She’s changed. She lights up,
but in the dark, out in the cold
she appears angry with flaming eyes.

“There’s no way to patch things up now,”
she grumbles, “but things cannot get any worse,”
until a kid with candy

passes by, grabs her, kicks her
into the field,
lighting it on fire.

She’s all alone in the blaze,
her orange number ruined,
ruined for good,

but one seed digs a trench
and waits until next Autumn.

A gourd in his white number
approaches the patch,
“Hey, it’s my dad! It’s my dad…
Hey, Dad, over here!”

His seed was a dork of a gourd,
but he was his son, and the dad had changed
after his wife ran off and someone burned the plot
across the street. He took his son home
and told him all about how he met his mom
in her orange striped number.

“She was gourd-geous, son!”

10/15/2022

*an item of merchandise and especially clothing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 10/21/2022 11:08:00 AM
Witty and sweet. Very well penned. Loved it Kim. Cheers
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 1:51:00 PM
Thank you, Paghundu!
Date: 10/18/2022 6:39:00 AM
Oh so very clever and fun Kim! Wild creativity and cleverness. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 1:51:00 PM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 10/18/2022 2:14:00 AM
Really Nice Funny and Enjoyable simultaneous Fine word play Gourd geous! Wow!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2022 4:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anisha!
Date: 10/18/2022 1:24:00 AM
Oh this so good, Kim, Clever and funny.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2022 4:43:00 AM
Thank you, Harry! :)
Date: 10/17/2022 12:03:00 PM
VERY creative writing, Kim. I love this
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2022 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 10/16/2022 7:59:00 AM
Pretty creative, there. Pumpkin spice is the new black?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/16/2022 10:48:00 AM
LOL…right!?
Date: 10/16/2022 6:35:00 AM
Very creative! Quite the imagination, and skill! Loved it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/16/2022 10:48:00 AM
Thank, Joe! Thought I’d try a little conversation:)
Date: 10/15/2022 11:26:00 PM
Lovely play on words. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/16/2022 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend! ((Hugs))
Date: 10/15/2022 7:57:00 PM
My 'critique:' 'Pumpkelicious!' So enjoyed! ~ Simple Simon, the Pumpkin Pie Man
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/16/2022 5:36:00 AM
So boo-tiful of you to comment! Thank you, my friend! You always make me smile!
Date: 10/15/2022 5:26:00 PM
Best halloween poem ever!! ~;o)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2022 6:20:00 PM
Thanks, Arlo! Glad you enjoyed it! :)
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