Hello Pumpkin

“Hello Pumpkin! You’re gourd-geous
in your striped orange number!” *

Just boo-tiful!

Witch is why, I want to take you to my home.”

“I’d rather patch things up here,” she says.

He takes her home, cuts, depulps and carves
her. She’s changed. She lights up,
but in the dark, out in the cold
she appears angry with flaming eyes.

“There’s no way to patch things up now,”
she grumbles, “but things cannot get any worse,”
until a kid with candy

passes by, grabs her, kicks her
into the field,
lighting it on fire.

She’s all alone in the blaze,
her orange number ruined,
ruined for good,

but one seed digs a trench
and waits until next Autumn.

A gourd in his white number
approaches the patch,
“Hey, it’s my dad! It’s my dad…
Hey, Dad, over here!”

His seed was a dork of a gourd,
but he was his son, and the dad had changed
after his wife ran off and someone burned the plot
across the street. He took his son home
and told him all about how he met his mom
in her orange striped number.

“She was gourd-geous, son!”

10/15/2022

*an item of merchandise and especially clothing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Zahid Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Witty and sweet. Very well penned. Loved it Kim. Cheers
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 1:51 PM
Thank you, Paghundu!
Fowler Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 6:39 AM
Oh so very clever and fun Kim! Wild creativity and cleverness. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 1:51 PM
Thanks, Linda!
Dutta Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 2:14 AM
Really Nice Funny and Enjoyable simultaneous Fine word play Gourd geous! Wow!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 4:44 AM
Thanks so much, Anisha!
Horsman Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 1:24 AM
Oh this so good, Kim, Clever and funny.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Harry! :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 12:03 PM
VERY creative writing, Kim. I love this
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 2:27 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Kyser Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Pretty creative, there. Pumpkin spice is the new black?
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 10:48 AM
LOL…right!?
DiMino Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Very creative! Quite the imagination, and skill! Loved it!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Thank, Joe! Thought I’d try a little conversation:)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 11:26 PM
Lovely play on words. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Thank you, dear friend! ((Hugs))
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 7:57 PM
My 'critique:' 'Pumpkelicious!' So enjoyed! ~ Simple Simon, the Pumpkin Pie Man
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 5:36 AM
So boo-tiful of you to comment! Thank you, my friend! You always make me smile!
Parker Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 5:26 PM
Best halloween poem ever!! ~;o)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:20 PM
Thanks, Arlo! Glad you enjoyed it! :)
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