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Hello Mary-Lou

(MaGowen’s Pizzaland Monroe, CT 2008)
The caterwaul of the jukebox blends seamlessly with the screech of infants, and the fumes of garlic hanging heavily in the air. The true mama’s and papa’s are here, here where the dough flies the glasses clink; and the Beatles belt out Strawberry Fields Forever .... The roar of unruly children, bashing video buttons to Roll Over Beethoven pounds into the diners temples, dulled with Pinot noir, Chianti and pitchers of golden ale. Trays, tall, saucer-shaped sit beside cherry red baskets of pristine white bread, as the fire engine red corvettes pull up outside. The jet-black and chrome model T’s vie for spaces on the asphalt lot outside the restaurants doors. Sweet-hearts wait for the cracked, green-vinyl booths like penitents at a Sunday mornings mass. Pizza pies fly by on stainless saucer- shaped plates landing on cluttered Formica tables dressed with vinegars and shake cheese Racecars zoom around the game track; as kids run pell-mell down the aisles. And, only Mary Lou knows “Who’s on first?”

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Date: 11/20/2013 6:41:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win. Brilliant poem. You painted a vivid scene with your words.
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:56:00 PM
Debbie, , Congratulations on your win. Awesome Beatle Mania Poem.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:46:00 PM
now you have that song etched in my head...I think you crafted a wonderful beatles poem...u tried to start one a couple times and never got anywhere with it...you however did a fantastic job...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/19/2013 4:21:00 PM
what a descriptive poem this is, Debs. Congrats to you. This poem has a lot of work put into it.
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Date: 11/19/2013 2:55:00 PM
'Hello Mary Lou, good-bye heart, sweet Mary Lou I'm so in love with you. I knew Mary Lou, we'd never part so hello Mary Lou, goodbye heart'...Among other things, this made me hungry as hell...all that food! Beautiful and VERY origional take cher...Congrats - Tim
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Date: 11/19/2013 12:30:00 PM
Well, darn.............if I were pickin' ......this would be number 1. You always go above and beyond....and this is once again, stellar !
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Date: 11/19/2013 11:47:00 AM
Hi cool lady another fine win, congratulations xx
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Date: 11/19/2013 10:49:00 AM
- Beatles will never die! - Think I could the text on almost all the songs. - "Happy Times"! - A contest that was fun to take part in! - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, DEBBIE !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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Date: 11/19/2013 10:43:00 AM
really insightful and puts the reader..me , in the booth ! Congratulations !
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Date: 11/16/2009 4:35:00 PM
good write, I see what you mean...thanks on La Iguana...something about the music, people and just where it is at...gets me in the mood..Danny
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Date: 12/14/2008 5:19:00 PM
Deborah this place sounds just amazing - Been years since I have seen any place like that - Be honest I didn't know any still existed - Great nostalgic poem that is just excellent - God Bless you hon, MJ
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