Get Your Premium Membership

Hello Bad Boys

FINAL EPISODE OF PURE FANTASY
Hello Bad Boys!

The starry, twilight zone high above, this night
With it’s shooting stars, and the moon, so bright,
Looked heavenly, even Venus, was in sight,
It was clear, could see far and beyond
Across every mountain, ocean and pond!
Echo Man needs my help, I look
In the mirror, irresistible, I’m a delight!
Fire Ball boldly steps out into the dark,
Her brilliance, here on earth has
Made It’s mark !
Echo Man’s super hero skills in communication,
To his planet and soldiers, crosses all
Boundaries of inter galactic telecommunication,
It’s  ziiiiiiing however, deafens those near 
But reaches Planet Mars!
The prison guards lay on the ground dazed,
Immobilized by Fire Ball but don’t seem fazed,
She grabs the keys, poor earthling men,
That you succumb to such dazzling beauty,
I’m only a woman but daring and bolder!
Fire Ball throws Echo Man the keys, he opens
The prison doors, and with his mind
Bends the prison bars,
This superhero from Mars!
And so Fire Ball and Echo Man are re-united
They were fleetingly delighted!
But at the exit stand Bad Heroes Scorpion Sting,  
Guiltless and Midnight Raven,
Hello Bad Boys – what brings you 
here this night?
We want to take over Earth they said
You are in our way
You are unable to dissuade, win or sway,
Us, you will lose this fight
For with us lies great might!
Fire Ball looks right through them 
With fire in her eyes,
The Bad boys put up their shields, they know
They have heard that her beauty fries,
And bedazzles any man, even a super hero,
She will reduce to zero!
Scorpion Sting has a tiny tail 
That pierces with poison,
First the unfortunate humans are frozen,
Then die a miserable slow death!
Midnight Raven’s razor sharp beak 
Goes through two men deep
Finally they take their last breath!
Guiltless has a heart of stone,
Will kill for fun,
It’s a game for him, displays 
No compassion
Or, even a touch of emotion!
And of course Midnight Raven 
Loves working at night not during the day,
For then is as blind as a bat,
An absolute fact!
His night vision though is extreme,
And his muscled five pack body a dream!
He can see Paris from New York 
And vice versa.
Guiltless, Scorpion Sting and Midnight raven,
Are ready to fight,
No sweat bad boys, Echo Man replies
Will soon have help from the skies in heaven,
These bad boys were inhumane and brazen!
No sooner did Echo Man say this, 
Angel Face, Tidal Wave and Wacky Joe,
Arrive, out of the bright blue skies
We took a short cut, past bright dazzling stars
They said, stopped by at Mars for instructions.
Then began our earthbound flight,
Dodged many meteors and debris in sight, 
Our Galaxy which includes Planet Earth
Indeed has a very wide 
Circumference, length and girth!
So here we have an army of light 
Who never wished any malice or harm,
Wanted to make friends with Planet Earth 
And the Bad Boys,
Ready to fight earthlings!
We have to fight for this Planet,
What they did to me, dammit,
Was from sheer
Ignorant unadulterated fear!
A battle ensues
Frightfully sad,
Each bad boy an absolute cad,
They fight fiercely and dirty, but no match for
The good guys,
More Super Heroes arrive Galactic Warrior and 
Celestial Calm both fierce warriors who fight
For the good, and the light
Will eliminate the bad, in this wicked fight!
Humans have gathered and are cheering 
The Super Heroes who come from 
Mars and Venus, 
Humans no longer them fearing,
But don’t like the bad boys from 
Planet Jupiter!
Both sides have casualties 
The warriors from Mars few,
But the Bad bays know they have lost,
Don’t want to face an embarrassing situation 
Or defeat, which seems due!
So they fly up into the sky, past the Milky Way
And disappear, they know they are no match
Against Mars and Venus, one day there 
Will be a rematch!
The USA President is called, he approaches 
Echo Man with extended hand,
We welcome you to our land
The two leaders become bosom pals,
And the locals
Become relaxed!
Echo man looks much like us humans
Only ears and nose far pointier, not Fire Ball
Her plastic surgeon made her look like us!
She spots a soldier in the crowd 
Lowers her eyes, and demurely 
Takes his hand and they walk far away,
To find a bundle of hay,
She had freed her man from prison bars,
But humans looked cuter than men from mars!
She will one day persuade him to go with her
To Planet Venus,
She had chosen her mate,
This was her Super Hero’s fate!
 

END OF 1ST SERIES

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
12
Date: 11/12/2019 2:16:00 PM
Hello Jennifer Proxenos, this poem has a lot of action. It kept me reading to the end. Very well done. Have a nice day my friend. hugs Darlene
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 11/14/2019 9:54:00 AM
Hi Darlene, how lovely to hear from you - thank you for a wonderful comment - hugs and blessings dear friend. Jennifer.
Date: 10/25/2019 1:28:00 PM
Wow You sure left me breathless, Jenny! Your actionpacked narrative verse is the longest poem I have read on Soup, but it was truly worth it! You took me with you to fantasyland:) ~ Congratulations on the POTD award! Warm regards & Hugs my friend // paul
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/25/2019 2:39:00 PM
Thank-you so much Paul - a very kind wonderful comment - there could be a 2nd series, part one someday! Glad you enjoyed fantasyland - an awesome comment dear friend, Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/25/2019 8:31:00 AM
I like your character, congrats on POTD.
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/25/2019 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Richard - superheroes are so wonderful to write about - you can write weird, humorous, breathtaking, drama, inter galactic relationships and so much more, whatever tickles your fancy! Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/24/2019 12:37:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. dear Jenny - Sorry I am late ... sometimes I forget to check this page - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/24/2019 2:29:00 PM
Don't worry my friend, me also. Thank you for the congratulations! Hugs and love, Jenny.
Date: 10/24/2019 12:16:00 PM
WoW! Jennifer, I agree with Gershon, this is a superb super hero adventure. It was so good, filled sci-fi and much more. No wonder you got poem of the day. Congratulations my friend, it was well deserved. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/24/2019 2:28:00 PM
Thank you dear Alexis - I so enjoyed writing it, was almost transported to another realm! Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/24/2019 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Jennifer!
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/24/2019 11:26:00 AM
Thank-you Kim - kind of you to stop by with congrats. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/23/2019 11:26:00 AM
Fantastic super-hero adventure, Jennifer, fittingly recognized as POTD. Congratulations and warmest wishes to you! Cheers, Gershon
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/24/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank-you Gershon my friend, you are such cute sweet soul and such a great supporter for all your fellow poets. Thank-you for your warm wishes and congrats. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/23/2019 11:09:00 AM
Hello great lady! Your imagination "crosses all Boundaries" dear Jenny! Taking us to new realms.. invoking super heroes to eliminate evil.. a great write, soul sister. and always a great pleasure to read you.. Congratulations on your POTD! You definitely deserve the honour and recognition.. Happy to see you! Warmest wishes.. love and hugs.
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/24/2019 11:51:00 AM
Oh Besma my darling friend, my honest sincere supporter, and a soul sister whom I hold in the highest esteem, a poet of note and talent next to none. Your comments are always sooooooooo awesome. Thank-you Besma for being who you are! Hugs and love, Jenny.
Date: 10/23/2019 7:38:00 AM
certainly entertaining - although I hadn't read the other episodes, I was quite gripped
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/24/2019 11:36:00 AM
I'm glad Jack and thanks for your very welcome visit - perhaps if you have time you would enjoy the first two episodes. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/22/2019 8:03:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … very entertaining is your journey into the universe of fantasy - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/23/2019 12:29:00 AM
That was my final episode - glad you found it entertaining my friend. Thank you Lindsay, Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/22/2019 8:03:00 PM
Ahh I see I missed the potd! Congrats my friend lovely write!;)
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/23/2019 12:27:00 AM
Very sweet of you to call by Brenda, thank you for your comment and congrats. Hugs , Jennifer.
Date: 10/22/2019 1:05:00 PM
Belated congratulations on your POTD, Jennifer! :-)
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/22/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thank-you Carol - I appreciate your visit and congrats. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/22/2019 9:11:00 AM
Quite an epic tale you tell here, Jenn, and in the end the girl gets the guy, and takes him to find a bale of hay...those super heroes from Venus are that way, they say. Congrats on POTD my friend. Hope your move went well. Hugs, John
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/22/2019 2:14:00 PM
Unpacking in our new home but furniture only arriving on the 28th - Curtains tomorrow! Thanks you for a great comment John and your congrats. - they do say that men are from Mars and women from Venus hence my two superheroes! Hugs and blessings Jenn.
Date: 10/21/2019 9:10:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD.. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/22/2019 2:09:00 PM
Thank-you Eve, very sweet of you. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 6:36:00 PM
Bad boys indeed!! Whether from Planet Earth- or from a Galaxy far, far away. Always needing a Hero, to save the Day!! (In this case, a Woman) Very Clever and Creative Jennifer. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/22/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Brandy - Queen of romantic poems on Soup - An awesome comment - heroes and heroines are so cool heroes for us, but this lucky soldier got lucky with a sexy heroine, Fire Ball! Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 3:28:00 PM
Hurrah! Roses and champagne, Jennifer mou Outstanding work! ~ KUDOS~ Panagiota xxxxxx
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Panagiota mou, beautiful comment! Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 2:37:00 PM
My heartfelt congratulations, dear Jennifer for your POTD. Thoroughly deserved. Hugs
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Victor, you are really such a sweet kind man, and an enormously talented poet - combine the two and you are an awesome person! Thank-you for you heartfelt congratulations on my POTD which are humbly accepted. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 1:25:00 PM
Wonderful! Congratulations on POTD, Jennifer Best Wished~ Warren
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 1:40:00 PM
Warren my friend - how are you - thank you for stopping by so lovely to hear from you and thank you for the congrats. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 12:22:00 PM
This is so delightful and creative Jennifer. "Her plastic surgeon made her look like us!" This line made me laugh out loud. I enjoyed reading about your super heroes. Congratulations on having this little masterpiece deservingly honored with POTD! : ) xxoo
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 1:11:00 PM
H Connie, so nice to have you visit - I have missed your always so kind and apt comments. Thank you Connie - glad you had a laugh! Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations for poem of the day Jennifer :)
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 1:04:00 PM
Hi Heidi - thank you so much - your visit and congratulations are truly appreciated. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 11:13:00 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 12:11:00 PM
Thank-you Vjay, your kindness and support is always so appreciated my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 10:32:00 AM
(((X-E-NOS)))...defender of the Poetic Realms... the creator of creative consciousness...in da house!...Congrats!! Jenn on your fantabulous POTD!!...all my poetic love...^WW^ :o)
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 11:05:00 AM
Hi Wingster, Jennster here - just now you will have me believing i'm an invincible superhero and I will fly across the pond to meet all my poetic friends, who are also super heroes in my eyes! Hugs and poetic love (((X-E-NOS)))
Date: 10/21/2019 8:58:00 AM
"Humans look cuter than men from Mars", LOVE it Jen. Great story! Congrats on POTD.
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 10:55:00 AM
Hi Phil, yup I thought the line was apt for a romance between human and superhero! Thanks for your congrats Phil, much appreciated. Jen.
Date: 10/21/2019 8:52:00 AM
Awesome write, Jennifer. Congratulations on POTD. Charlie
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 10:52:00 AM
Thank-you Charles, so lovely to have you visit and thank-you for your congrats. Hope you are well. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/21/2019 8:31:00 AM
Nice potd Jen. Not too often a long one is chosen
Login to Reply
PROXENOS Avatar
JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 10/21/2019 10:50:00 AM
Hi SOS - Your poems are intense my friend - you are quite the philosopher, enjoy your style in poems and also in comments. Many thanks for your visit and your congratulations. Hugs, Jennifer.
12