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Helllllppppp

Here is some great advice to help you through the day The whole world was meant to laugh and enjoy life It's just that some of you didn't get the memo Well that's okay, it's never too late to start What is happening with these lines They keep on getting shorter I've totally lost control I am possessed I... uh... © Jack Ellison 2014

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/13/2014 7:23:00 AM

You're so silly! Love it! Your happiness is contagious. Keep infecting the lot of us! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/13/2014 7:28:00 AM

You got it, my sweet California girl! Keep on a-giggling! Love, Jack XXXXXX

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/10/2014 11:16:00 AM

What! We missed one yesterday? Dragon and I are horrified!Maybe we were possessed, too!... But don't worry Santa Jack... Just sing a Christmas Carol and everything will return to normal... Swear! Honest, it's the truth! It worked for Dragon... He keeps dancing around here to the music 'Felis Navidad' and adds a cha-cha-cha every couple of words... Even that serious Grandpa Troll is smiling to that one... Yes, and little ole' me too... Cha-Cha- Cha!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/13/2014 7:26:00 AM

Can you hear me singing??? Hmmm! Our Golden is howling... don't know if she's singing along OR has a problem with my singing! XXX

Tim Smith

Date: 12/9/2014 6:37:00 PM

Excellent..lol..love it my friend

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2014 8:13:00 PM

Having fun!!! Thanks! LOL

Jan Allison

Date: 12/9/2014 4:24:00 PM

love the form of the poem and the humour:-) Hugs jan xxxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2014 8:14:00 PM

Silly nonsense eh!!! Talk tomorrow... love and hugs XXX