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Hell Bound

Hell Bound Shattered is this fragmented being, too many pieces left to find, left with this incomplete thing, the puzzle pieces of the mind. Now what is worth mentioning when only you can understand, your walking with two left feet and holding onto empty hands. Shadows cross a field where it is already to dark to see, dancing souls now bounce around chained up no longer free. In death your left suffering, silently praying please God please, and when nothing is what's answering loneliness becomes your disease. No one said life is better there neither then, here, or now, you chose to believe the other thing so the elevator pulled you down. Now your left wondering what the Hell just went wrong, still looking for some sympathy while singing your same sad song. Instead of your dreamed angel wings your evil ass grew a tail, the Devil is Hot forever you'll rot, not in Heaven but in Hell... bmdavey@ 02/08/16

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Date: 2/8/2016 5:18:00 AM
Ah, to heaven or to hell... Great conceptual piece, Brian!
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/8/2016 7:43:00 AM
thank you so much

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