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Helen of Troy

Her “face could launch a thousand ships” It was love at first sight as I watched her strip Till her camel toe Began to show And I realized she didn’t have lips! 8/11/11

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Sean Claudine

Date: 9/29/2011 11:48:00 AM

nice style, it all comes together as beautiful contradiction.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/7/2011 11:20:00 AM

hahahhahaaa... witty!

Judy Ball

Date: 8/27/2011 10:29:00 PM

This one made me smile. Really cute. Shows a creative mind and a great sense of humor. God Bless and congrats on your wins. JB

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 8/25/2011 5:11:00 PM

LOL at this one! Sorry for the delay-Thanks so much for entering my contest-A big congrats. to you :)

Jack Horne

Date: 8/23/2011 12:33:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 8/22/2011 7:17:00 PM

Congrats on your win with 'Helen of Troy'! Love Glenna

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/22/2011 3:45:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, susan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/22/2011 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/22/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's "Burlesque Twist" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Tony Lane

Date: 8/22/2011 10:14:00 AM

Great win. Good for you. Tony

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/21/2011 9:45:00 PM

gross! what a freak out. Congratulations to you Susan

David Williams

Date: 8/21/2011 5:10:00 PM

hey Susan congrats on your win, loved this first time around,, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2011 4:21:00 PM

Congrats Susan on a top ten sweet success with this fun filled poetry luv.. superbly witty..luv..

John Freeman

Date: 8/21/2011 4:00:00 PM

Great job Susan, Thanks for the camel toe poe. Congratulations on your second place. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/21/2011 3:30:00 PM

Whoa! Helen is really a Troy? Right? This is just outrageous! Congrats on burlesquing your way to the top. Gwendolen

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/21/2011 2:09:00 PM

a belly laugher... Love it! Congrats on the well deserved placement.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2011 11:20:00 AM

This was hilarious!!! Many congratulations, Susan : )

Tony Lane

Date: 8/18/2011 9:04:00 PM

Good work in the contest. Tony

David Williams

Date: 8/18/2011 3:02:00 AM

hey Susan, congrats on an outrageously funny poem, i loved it, ha ha ha ha, must watch the movie.... David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/18/2011 1:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Susan. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/17/2011 10:48:00 PM

Congrats Susan on a super win with this terrific piece.. I luved it first time around luv..

Jack Horne

Date: 8/15/2011 2:49:00 PM

LOL, I'll have to come back to this one whenever I need a good laugh! I just read this one out to Sue and she's giggling and nearly spilling her cuppa : )

Johnny Sumler

Date: 8/14/2011 4:48:00 PM

Wow you really got me with this piece. Had my serious face on from the begining, then laughter teased me at the end. Another wonderful write. You did a remarkable entry with this stylish form!

James Fraser

Date: 8/13/2011 1:56:00 PM

Nice one Susan, you made me chuckle with this witty poetry. Have a lovely weekend :)

Lisa Cooper

Date: 8/13/2011 8:39:00 AM

lol now that was funny lol