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Helen of Troy

Her “face could launch a thousand ships”
It was love at first sight as I watched her strip
Till her camel toe
Began to show
And I realized she didn’t have lips!


8/11/11

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Sean Claudine

September 29, 2011 at 11:48 AM

nice style, it all comes together as beautiful contradiction.

Dinda Minardi

September 7, 2011 at 11:20 AM

hahahhahaaa... witty!

Judy Ball

August 27, 2011 at 10:29 PM

This one made me smile. Really cute. Shows a creative mind and a great sense of humor. God Bless and congrats on your wins. JB

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

August 25, 2011 at 5:11 PM

LOL at this one! Sorry for the delay-Thanks so much for entering my contest-A big congrats. to you :)

Jack Horne

August 23, 2011 at 12:33 PM

I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Sunflower Poetess

August 22, 2011 at 7:17 PM

Congrats on your win with 'Helen of Troy'! Love Glenna

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 22, 2011 at 3:45 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, susan

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 22, 2011 at 3:37 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 22, 2011 at 3:07 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's "Burlesque Twist" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Tony Lane

August 22, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Great win. Good for you. Tony

Robert A. Dufresne

August 21, 2011 at 9:45 PM

gross! what a freak out. Congratulations to you Susan

David Williams

August 21, 2011 at 5:10 PM

hey Susan congrats on your win, loved this first time around,, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 21, 2011 at 4:21 PM

Congrats Susan on a top ten sweet success with this fun filled poetry luv.. superbly witty..luv..

John Freeman

August 21, 2011 at 4:00 PM

Great job Susan, Thanks for the camel toe poe. Congratulations on your second place. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song

August 21, 2011 at 3:30 PM

Whoa! Helen is really a Troy? Right? This is just outrageous! Congrats on burlesquing your way to the top. Gwendolen

Nancy Jones

August 21, 2011 at 2:09 PM

a belly laugher... Love it! Congrats on the well deserved placement.

Jack Horne

August 19, 2011 at 11:20 AM

This was hilarious!!! Many congratulations, Susan : )

Tony Lane

August 18, 2011 at 9:04 PM

Good work in the contest. Tony

David Williams

August 18, 2011 at 3:02 AM

hey Susan, congrats on an outrageously funny poem, i loved it, ha ha ha ha, must watch the movie.... David

Joyce Johnson

August 18, 2011 at 1:25 AM

Congratulations on your win Susan. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 17, 2011 at 10:48 PM

Congrats Susan on a super win with this terrific piece.. I luved it first time around luv..

Jack Horne

August 15, 2011 at 2:49 PM

LOL, I'll have to come back to this one whenever I need a good laugh! I just read this one out to Sue and she's giggling and nearly spilling her cuppa : )

Johnny Sumler

August 14, 2011 at 4:48 PM

Wow you really got me with this piece. Had my serious face on from the begining, then laughter teased me at the end. Another wonderful write. You did a remarkable entry with this stylish form!