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Held In Your Arms

Held in your arms, lured by your charms. Passion's flame fairly begun, love instantly lit up my heart; strong enough to tear time apart, it eclipsed the light of the sun. love instantly lit up my heart, sending all my blues on the run; two lonely hearts morphed into one, strong enough to tear time apart. Held in your arms, love instantly lit up my heart and its spell cannot be undone; strong enough to tear time apart, lured by your charms. Lured by your charms, held in your arms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2018 2:49:00 PM
Love the reversed repetition of the 2 opening-closing lines. Beautiful form and you did it justice, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Line, I welcome your input and appreciate your time my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/20/2015 7:23:00 AM
Emile, lovely poem that is so filled with charm and images nice..:)! ~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/20/2015 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Olive, your continued support is much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/19/2015 11:55:00 PM
Emile what a beautiful ballad as Anna said a masterpiece, I don't usually like different forms of writing but you have created this wonderful piece, thank you so much for visiting my page and for your lovely comment.Take care........Vera............
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/20/2015 7:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Vera, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 4/19/2015 4:22:00 PM
Excellent, exquisite, beautiful, masterpiece! A 7 from me!
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Anna, your words have cheered my heart. Emile.
Date: 4/19/2015 1:50:00 PM
absolutely charming Emile - I have never seen this form before:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your opinion means a great deal to me. Emile.
Date: 4/19/2015 1:19:00 PM
- Sounds hard to write .... but this is out of first class (7) - Beautiful poem, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:59:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.

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