Notes About The Poem

Heirlooms

Heirloom events are often solemn occasions
Weddings, high school or college graduations
Grandfathers take sons or grandsons aside
To bequeath his pocket watch with pride

Slowly he'll raise the timepiece to his ear
Pause and listen to the ticking gears
He'll dangle the chain, click cover to open
Reverently hold the beloved token

Peering at crystal face with serious affects
Both mentally count second hand’s ticks 
With nod of head, grandfather might relay
Special words of wisdom in his own way

I remember with fondness my own ceremony
Granddad’s advice more valuable than money
“Thing about time sure to help you through...
 Is be where you are whatever you do”

Thanking my Granddad, we shook hands 
In hindsight I know I did not fully understand
Years swiftly passed with many tick tocks
Today I give my son Granddad’s pocket watch

Original Written Jan. 17, 2016
Revised April 20, 2018




Early Childhood Memory Contest - 
By Line Gauthier - Any Rhyme Form - April 24, 2018
First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

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Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 6:56 PM
and the tradition gets handed down and down again. That is very nice, Susan. I am glad I was able to find this nostalgic tribute to your family back here in older poems.
Gentry Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 12:51 AM
Gosh Andrea, you did go back. Thank you!
Moorman Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 5:58 AM
Susan, how fortunate you were to have known your Grandad. I never had that pleasure, but I have extremely fond memories of my parents and the sage advice each of them passed on to me. Congratulations on you super win!
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 12:44 AM
Thanks Curtis for reading and commenting. Very kind.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 5:29 AM
Wonderfully done Susan, lump in the throat wonderful :) Congrats on your top win! xomo
Gentry Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Ahhh thank you. Appreciate.
Carmack Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:32 PM
Congrats on your first place win Susan.
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Thank you!
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Congratulations on your win, Susan, wonderful poem and memories ..Hugs Eve ~`*
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Thank you!
Murray Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:15 PM
A wonder description of a lovely tradition. Congratulations on your high placement Susan.
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Thank you!
Rose  Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 3:44 PM
well done, congratulations on your winning poem
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Thank you!
Haight Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your dear grandfather, Susan. Congratulations on your podium win for your beautiful poem. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Thank you!
Canerdy Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Beautiful and moving, Susan! CONGRATS! Janice
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Thank you!
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Beautiful and superbly penned, Susan. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Gentry Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Thank you so much for the awesome win! And for sponsoring the contest. It has to be a lot of work.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Awwwww - what a lovely memory linked to your wonderful grandfather! A very moving tribute indeed that is so deserving of its top placement in this contest! Congratulations to you dear Susan! Hugs. Pandita
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:41 PM
Thank you!
Gondolf Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Such a wonderful story, Susan, congrats on your win. John
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:41 PM
Thank you!
Gonzales Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your top win Susan! A beautiful reminiscence of your early childhood with your granddad. Regards:)
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Thank you!
Talbot Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:55 AM
Brought a lump to my throat, evoking a sad reminder that I only knew my mums mum, a very brife 4 year olds memory. My other grandparents lost their lives in WWII. Hope your son felt as proud as you did way back when? Congratulations on your win Susan, Mick
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Awww. Thank you for commenting.
Callus Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 11:10 AM
What a lovely sentimental memory, Susan! Incidentally, I still possess my grandfather's pocket watch...of sentimental value, even if it does not work. Regards // paul
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Thank you.
Horsman Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Wow, love this, it's so sincere..
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Thank you. Appreciate your input.
Hoffman Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 9:18 PM
An awesome heartfelt nostalgic write Susan; good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 6:35 PM
The solemnity and reverence are palpable, and serve as a "chain link" in time between the generations. I'd say "watch out" for this one in the contest! Eternal sentiments... :) gw
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 11:07 PM
So sweet. Thank you. I appreciate your input.
Gauthier Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Beautiful, Susan. Superbly penned.
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Thanks Line.
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