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Heightened Perception

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Experimenting with new forms~

An ocean in a drop of water
The cosmos in a speck of dust
A divine spark in every being

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2022 2:56:00 PM

Wow! Profound! A universe in our minds…

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/11/2022 4:11:00 AM

Amazing write!

Anil Deo

Date: 2/10/2022 3:40:00 AM

Let me join in and celebrate your TROPHY with this new form. Each, a great stand-alone line. PTL

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 4:05:00 AM

Glad you also are there to celebrate my successful launching of a poem in a new form. Anil brother, I know you are a well wisher ! Thanks a lot ! Peace and love !

Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/9/2022 8:47:00 PM

I think you've weaved and fused the weightlessness of the visible and the invisible components, of an infinite and ageless consciousness. Amazingly beautiful Valsa!!...ab

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 4:02:00 AM

Thank you very much for your highly insightful comment ! Anselmo, thank you so much ! Stay Happy !

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/9/2022 3:46:00 PM

Ain't that God's Truth! Everything in creation a doorway to the infinite. Love it, Valsa! Excellent write! Joe.

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 4:00:00 AM

Everyone in the image of his great Creator, bearing His indelible stamp...no one greater or smaller ! Thanks a lot Joe

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/9/2022 3:13:00 PM

Valsa, you certainly are a master at any poetry form you try. Enjoyed Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 3:57:00 AM

Oh.... it is a great compliment.... ! How should I thank you? No words dear!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/9/2022 12:05:00 PM

Wonderfully apt words. Love the analogy/-ies, as well as the implications thereof, Valsa. Bravo, Gershon

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 3:56:00 AM

I feel taken aback by your wonderful comment ! Very grateful for your words of appreciation !

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/9/2022 10:36:00 AM

and a spark separates the light from dark! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 3:54:00 AM

Much gratitude.... dear poet friend Rico !

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/9/2022 5:35:00 AM

Dear Valsa, you have mastered the usage of this new form, and there is a great deal of substance in these statements of enhanced awareness and insight.

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 3:53:00 AM

This is my first poem in this form. Glad you liked it . thanks for the great encouragement !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/9/2022 4:47:00 AM

Much depth in these words of heightened perspective and wisdom. A FAVE for me to ponder and reflect on.

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 3:52:00 AM

I feel honored.... ! Thanks a lot Vijay!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/9/2022 2:03:00 AM

So also faith as little as a mustard seed,

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 3:51:00 AM

Yes, indeed ! Thanks a lot dear Victor !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/9/2022 12:12:00 AM

I really love how you have made us aware how minuscule we really are yet each of us is important enough to contain a divine spark. Beautiful Valsa. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George
Date: 2/10/2022 3:50:00 AM

Thanks a lot Connie for your very thoughtful and analytical comment ! Feel so delighted !

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