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Experimenting with new forms~

Heightened Perception

An ocean in a drop of water
The cosmos in a speck of dust
A divine spark in every being

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Kim Rodrigues

February 11, 2022 at 2:56 PM

Wow! Profound! A universe in our minds…

Swetha Vangaveti

February 11, 2022 at 4:11 AM

Amazing write!

Anil Deo

February 10, 2022 at 3:40 AM

Let me join in and celebrate your TROPHY with this new form. Each, a great stand-alone line. PTL

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 4:05 AM

Glad you also are there to celebrate my successful launching of a poem in a new form. Anil brother, I know you are a well wisher ! Thanks a lot ! Peace and love !

Anselmo Boles

February 9, 2022 at 8:47 PM

I think you've weaved and fused the weightlessness of the visible and the invisible components, of an infinite and ageless consciousness. Amazingly beautiful Valsa!!...ab

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 4:02 AM

Thank you very much for your highly insightful comment ! Anselmo, thank you so much ! Stay Happy !

Joseph P. DiMino

February 9, 2022 at 3:46 PM

Ain't that God's Truth! Everything in creation a doorway to the infinite. Love it, Valsa! Excellent write! Joe.

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 4:00 AM

Everyone in the image of his great Creator, bearing His indelible stamp...no one greater or smaller ! Thanks a lot Joe

Debra L Brown

February 9, 2022 at 3:13 PM

Valsa, you certainly are a master at any poetry form you try. Enjoyed Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 3:57 AM

Oh.... it is a great compliment.... ! How should I thank you? No words dear!

Gershon Wolf

February 9, 2022 at 12:05 PM

Wonderfully apt words. Love the analogy/-ies, as well as the implications thereof, Valsa. Bravo, Gershon

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 3:56 AM

I feel taken aback by your wonderful comment ! Very grateful for your words of appreciation !

Rico Leffanta

February 9, 2022 at 10:36 AM

and a spark separates the light from dark! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 3:54 AM

Much gratitude.... dear poet friend Rico !

Sotto Poet

February 9, 2022 at 5:35 AM

Dear Valsa, you have mastered the usage of this new form, and there is a great deal of substance in these statements of enhanced awareness and insight.

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 3:53 AM

This is my first poem in this form. Glad you liked it . thanks for the great encouragement !

Vijay Pandit

February 9, 2022 at 4:47 AM

Much depth in these words of heightened perspective and wisdom. A FAVE for me to ponder and reflect on.

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 3:52 AM

I feel honored.... ! Thanks a lot Vijay!

Victor Buhagiar

February 9, 2022 at 2:03 AM

So also faith as little as a mustard seed,

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 3:51 AM

Yes, indeed ! Thanks a lot dear Victor !

Connie Marcum Wong

February 9, 2022 at 12:12 AM

I really love how you have made us aware how minuscule we really are yet each of us is important enough to contain a divine spark. Beautiful Valsa. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George

February 10, 2022 at 3:50 AM

Thanks a lot Connie for your very thoughtful and analytical comment ! Feel so delighted !

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