Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Hee-hawing -- City vs Country Mouse

  
	         Country mouse’s unrestrained giggles drew the attention 
                    of city mouse, too sophisticated to mention 

                        that his cousin’s hee-hawing had city mouse
                           whipsawing between guffawing and prissy pretension

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Joseph P. DiMino August 10, 2026 at 9:11 AM And what about the antlers?! Oh, mouse, not moose -- good thing I read that again. Love it! What would Mickey Say? Gershon Wolf August 10, 2026 at 8:18 PM I remember when Bill 'Moose' Skowron came to bat for the Yankees in the '50's and '60's. The sound of 'MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSE' filled the ballpark.

Kim Rodrigues August 10, 2026 at 5:38 AM Love the wording! Very good and fun too! Gershon Wolf August 10, 2026 at 8:14 PM Very food and gun too! ~ Diss Lex Ickes

John Lawless August 10, 2026 at 5:36 AM was this at a NO CATS rally???????? Gershon Wolf August 10, 2026 at 8:10 PM Actually, it was. How'd you know, John? ~ Me-ow