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Heaven's Weight

Was this, what it was for? This path of metaphor Trails of similes and imagery Summits of sun-tossed poetry Have I run this marathon Bulked up my artistic bond So on pretty words, rely To bear witness, as you die? I would return it all, every single line To feel your flesh warming mine How weakly, pen and paper breaks Under the toll of heaven's weight Now alone, facing the permanency Of forever, my tears take a knee I surrender, I concede, I relent, I submit To whatever relief belief can give it. Maybe If I say my prayers Just right Maybe If I cleanse the sin From my sight Maybe The stars Will show where you are Tonight. 7/12/20

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Date: 7/23/2020 7:50:00 AM
Such a touching moving write, brilliant Michelle, and ever so true, having your love in your arms cannot be compared to anything on earth or take the place of it. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/15/2020 12:00:00 PM
Even in the saddest times, hope lives. I love the way you try to "cleanse the sin" and say your prayers hoping to find your lost love again. Beautifully penned, Michelle! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 7/15/2020 12:19:00 AM
Deep and moving, profound with the gravitas of life and death and beliefs and loneliness. One of those moments when you need a scalpel and words only can provide kindergarten scissors. "I would return it all, every single line / To feel your flesh warming mine". Wow.
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Date: 7/14/2020 10:34:00 AM
Beautifully written and well expressed this really touches the heart. Wonderful emotion. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/14/2020 7:24:00 AM
I feel the emotions of your write, Michelle--and your originality in crafting these words. Superb ending line.
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Date: 7/14/2020 4:20:00 AM
Well executed Michele...a heartfelt verse...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/13/2020 2:19:00 PM
Well scribed, but Fate left in God's hands frequently slips through the Old Man's fingers, so best to make the most of each moment!
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Date: 7/13/2020 5:19:00 AM
Lovely poem that whispers to the heart. Enjoyed and God bless you with many more :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/13/2020 9:03:00 PM
Appreciate it, Gina, thank you
Date: 7/13/2020 3:21:00 AM
Sad, but a touching poem, Michelle:)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/13/2020 9:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo
Date: 7/12/2020 11:07:00 PM
With a heavy heart, I read this lovingly crafted poem --- yet just wordsv--- as I fear that I know what is behind it. May you find your own special faith to strengthen and sustain you, Michelle, my dear friend. Blessings, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/12/2020 11:55:00 PM
Thank you, your support has always been dear to me, but this is a (mostly) fictional poem, although it is influenced by what is happening with my life now-

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