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Heaven's Gate

Will I find my way to heaven? Show me the pathway to the gate. Must I forgive seventy times seven? Will I find my way to heaven? Broken before I made eleven! A heart once pure was filled with hate. Will I find my way to Heaven? Show me the pathway to the gate. For Freddie's Triolet Contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Monterey Sirak
Date: 10/4/2014 9:19:00 AM
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Beautiful! You're on the right path my friend.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2014 4:37:00 PM
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I think Fred is going to like both of them..So darn its hard to choose.This one describes the purity of soul that gets tainted along the way ,with hate for happenings in life,yet with hope to find again heaven's gate.Its like a reconciliation with life,On the other hand ,the other one transmits sweet joy and beautiful rhytm..The other one ,I mean 'The pole dancer'.Both are nice differently.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/28/2014 6:37:00 PM
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The Pole dancer has a double meaning so I think he might appreciate it a bit more, thanks for this thoughtful comment.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/28/2014 7:02:00 AM
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so very beautiful richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/28/2014 9:16:00 AM
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Thanks Liam.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/27/2014 2:00:00 PM
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Well done Richard... They both are good....this one is a little safer but they say no risk no reward.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 5:48:00 PM
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Thanks I think I will go with the other one.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/27/2014 12:24:00 PM
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Richard what was the title of the Titanic poem I can't find it? L & L
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 5:49:00 PM
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The title is "do you remember me?"
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 7:57:00 AM
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such a sad write Richard i hope it does well for you:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 9:30:00 AM
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Thanks Jan.

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