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i felt that i received a miracle so this is my account how i saw it 

From the error of my ways in the blink of one's eyes falling backwards I called out Oh God please save me Inside the crunch mercy echoed as warm blood soaked the hands running through fingers wetly I roared in a broken state for help a vision flashed is this the end of me To see the look of worry in my brothers eyes He asked if I could stand dazed getting up weak my body felt heavy with pain I began to smile alive saying sorry for being stupid he said that he was about to get the priest when I got up moaning as usual thinking a close call to death Lord you saved me hearing my call Saviour feeling the fall cushioned Went to the doctors he bandaged my head cleaning the wound saying I was lucky giving a letter referring me to hospital My dearest father he took me there I felt warm comfort and love inside the pain Got to hospital safe with a gash in my head needing staples after an hour I was called handed a nurse my doctors letter Inside my mind I had flashes of internal bleeding almost two hours later I was called for xrays such a long wait Firstly a nurse washed the wound Waiting again for about forty minutes another nurse called my name I was taken away on a wheelchair almost panic like as they were taking me to the hospital bed I became worried concerned for my own well being so I asked if everything was ok to be honest and truthful they asked if I went to the toilet half an hour ago I replied as there was awful bruising around the kidneys felt like one of my **** cheeks growing up my back as I walked the swelling hurt They smiled and said it was a concern now its ruled out talk about getting me worried a blessing I thought They told me I had to two hairline fractures on my spine one in the neck the other lower down I began praying whole heartedly tears burning my cheeks please Lord Thinking how careless stupid I was shortcuts sitting back they told me to lie flat and not move until the bone specialist came and had a look at me my hand joined to the pyrmid of the Son begging His Father's mercy As I breathed feeling pain I began praying in earnest thinking the worst case is coming soon bearing tidings the doctor came accompanied by a nurse I was really worried he began getting me to bend my legs and knees then my arms in different directions asking if I felt numbness everything was working perfect which I could move only a little stiff from bruising thank God I said into myself Heaven's blessing over and over again for each miracle received Because in my heart i knew truth answered my call deeply this was a serious junction in my life The doctor smiled and said someone was looking over me I could not stop smiling even in pain never felt so happy relieved two others stapled my head ten the magic number count I was told not to lift anything heavy for eight weeks Talk about a sigh of relief they perscribed me painkillers I am not taking them as I am happy suffering learning a valuable lesson in life miracles happen every day I came out all smiles when I saw my lovely dad A worried look on his face then smiling when I told him the good news and on the way home my drama in what he did not see I promised God into myself I would tell the story true Letterkenny is understaffed fact Its clear to see in this state of emergency If I had internal bleeding I would of been dead This is a serious issue that needs to be addressed The staff were wonderful I sing that in the highest praise

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Date: 12/13/2016 12:31:00 PM
- I had to read it again .... I felt I had heard "something" ... but could not find it in my head .... Yes, it was truly a "miracle" .... "luck" ... "angelic guard" or "blessing from God" ... I do not know ... // hugs :)
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Date: 12/12/2016 2:07:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! A Very intense, very poignant, and very personal narrative my very good Mate on a most horrible event and situation. It is indeed a true miracle and a true blessing by Almighty God on Heaven high that you survived this whole ordeal. I know you count your blessing for sure (as I would too in any similar circumstance). Just remember to slow down a bit and to really take care of yourself Liam. An Outstanding Verse write on a real life event!! God Bless You!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 11/27/2016 4:11:00 PM
Hi Liam!:(( Wow! Oh my dearest friend Liam, I'm so very sorry and sad for what happened to you n' what you might be going thru right now with you n' your very dear family.It saddens me so much all this situation with you n' wished youve never gone thru some horrible like this.I am so very concerned more than ever about you Liam, but so thankful,relieved n' happy that our Lord n' his angels were with you n' that you are alive.Please get well n' take good care Liam.So very beautifully written but very tragic, to be held very close to my heart.Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 11/27/2016 3:12:00 PM
Wow Very intense situation you went through. Thank God you are ok. Thank you for sharing! Yes, miracles do happen. God Bless :)
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Date: 11/27/2016 2:40:00 PM
- A powerful story Liam ... yes, miracles happen - I'm glad it all ended well - A truly wonderful and honest poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2016 2:28:00 PM
Beautiful deep poem.
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