Heaven's Answer
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i felt that i received a miracle so this is my account how i saw it
From the error of my ways
in the blink of one's eyes
falling backwards I called out
Oh God please save me
Inside the crunch mercy echoed
as warm blood soaked the hands
running through fingers wetly
I roared in a broken state for help
a vision flashed is this the end of me
To see the look of worry in my brothers eyes
He asked if I could stand dazed
getting up weak my body felt heavy with pain
I began to smile alive
saying sorry for being stupid
he said that he was about to get the priest
when I got up moaning as usual
thinking a close call to death
Lord you saved me
hearing my call Saviour
feeling the fall cushioned
Went to the doctors
he bandaged my head
cleaning the wound
saying I was lucky
giving a letter referring me to hospital
My dearest father he took me there
I felt warm comfort and love inside the pain
Got to hospital safe
with a gash in my head needing staples
after an hour I was called
handed a nurse my doctors letter
Inside my mind
I had flashes
of internal bleeding
almost two hours later
I was called for xrays
such a long wait
Firstly a nurse washed the wound
Waiting again for about forty minutes
another nurse called my name
I was taken away on a wheelchair
almost panic like
as they were taking me to the hospital bed
I became worried
concerned for my own well being
so I asked if everything was ok
to be honest and truthful
they asked if I went to the toilet
half an hour ago I replied
as there was awful bruising around the kidneys
felt like one of my **** cheeks growing up my back
as I walked the swelling hurt
They smiled and said
it was a concern now its ruled out
talk about getting me worried
a blessing I thought
They told me
I had to two hairline fractures on my spine
one in the neck the other lower down
I began praying whole heartedly
tears burning my cheeks please Lord
Thinking how careless stupid I was shortcuts
sitting back they told me to lie flat and not move
until the bone specialist came and had a look at me
my hand joined to the pyrmid of the Son
begging His Father's mercy
As I breathed feeling pain
I began praying in earnest
thinking the worst case
is coming soon bearing tidings
the doctor came accompanied by a nurse
I was really worried
he began getting me
to bend my legs and knees
then my arms in different directions
asking if I felt numbness
everything was working perfect
which I could move
only a little stiff from bruising
thank God I said into myself Heaven's blessing
over and over again for each miracle received
Because in my heart
i knew truth answered my call
deeply this was a serious junction in my life
The doctor smiled and said
someone was looking over me
I could not stop smiling
even in pain never felt so happy relieved
two others stapled my head
ten the magic number count
I was told not to lift
anything heavy for eight weeks
Talk about a sigh of relief
they perscribed me painkillers
I am not taking them
as I am happy suffering
learning a valuable lesson in life
miracles happen every day
I came out all smiles
when I saw my lovely dad
A worried look on his face
then smiling when I told him
the good news and on the way home
my drama in what he did not see
I promised God into myself
I would tell the story true
Letterkenny is understaffed fact
Its clear to see in this state of emergency
If I had internal bleeding I would of been dead
This is a serious issue
that needs to be addressed
The staff were wonderful
I sing that in the highest praise
Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2016
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