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From the error of my ways in the blink of one's eyes falling backwards I called out Oh God please save me Inside the crunch mercy echoed as warm blood soaked the hands running through fingers wetly I roared in a broken state for help a vision flashed is this the end of me To see the look of worry in my brothers eyes He asked if I could stand dazed getting up weak my body felt heavy with pain I began to smile alive saying sorry for being stupid he said that he was about to get the priest when I got up moaning as usual thinking a close call to death Lord you saved me hearing my call Saviour feeling the fall cushioned Went to the doctors he bandaged my head cleaning the wound saying I was lucky giving a letter referring me to hospital My dearest father he took me there I felt warm comfort and love inside the pain Got to hospital safe with a gash in my head needing staples after an hour I was called handed a nurse my doctors letter Inside my mind I had flashes of internal bleeding almost two hours later I was called for xrays such a long wait Firstly a nurse washed the wound Waiting again for about forty minutes another nurse called my name I was taken away on a wheelchair almost panic like as they were taking me to the hospital bed I became worried concerned for my own well being so I asked if everything was ok to be honest and truthful they asked if I went to the toilet half an hour ago I replied as there was awful bruising around the kidneys felt like one of my arse cheeks growing up my back as I walked the swelling hurt They smiled and said it was a concern now its ruled out talk about getting me worried a blessing I thought They told me I had to two hairline fractures on my spine one in the neck the other lower down I began praying whole heartedly tears burning my cheeks please Lord Thinking how careless stupid I was shortcuts sitting back they told me to lie flat and not move until the bone specialist came and had a look at me my hand joined to the pyrmid of the Son begging His Father's mercy As I breathed feeling pain I began praying in earnest thinking the worst case is coming soon bearing tidings the doctor came accompanied by a nurse I was really worried he began getting me to bend my legs and knees then my arms in different directions asking if I felt numbness everything was working perfect which I could move only a little stiff from bruising thank God I said into myself Heaven's blessing over and over again for each miracle received Because in my heart i knew truth answered my call deeply this was a serious junction in my life The doctor smiled and said someone was looking over me I could not stop smiling even in pain never felt so happy relieved two others stapled my head ten the magic number count I was told not to lift anything heavy for eight weeks Talk about a sigh of relief they perscribed me painkillers I am not taking them as I am happy suffering learning a valuable lesson in life miracles happen every day I came out all smiles when I saw my lovely dad A worried look on his face then smiling when I told him the good news and on the way home my drama in what he did not see I promised God into myself I would tell the story true Letterkenny is understaffed fact Its clear to see in this state of emergency If I had internal bleeding I would of been dead This is a serious issue that needs to be addressed The staff were wonderful I sing that in the highest praise
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