Susan Ashley Poet Free verse

Heavenly Romance

Luminesence 
besprinkles fantasies
on liquid love
surrounding us.
Riding the ebb and flow,
we rock
we lull,
we ripple
in the reverberations 
of our aphrodisia.
Salty breezes
teases our excitement
as we salute Venus
with sexual gifts.
Moonlight waltzes scintillant riffles
across the glass-sea surface
to the bateau we sail;
as we dance, 
rumba romance
in rhythmic swells,
on our Little Piece of Heaven.


Susan Ashley
July 25, 2017

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Paul Callus December 8, 2017 at 2:12 PM No rhyme this time round, Susan, but who cares when you make up for it with other beautiful and captivating techniques. Very romantic. You have the gift of words, fantasy and imagination! ~ Warm regards // paul Susan Ashley December 8, 2017 at 6:40 PM Paul, your alluring comment is 'heavenly'. Your appealing thoughts and words warmly touch my heart and soul and inspire me to reach new heights. You also know how to put a smile (:big smile:) on my face. Thank you for your glowing appreciation and for your shining light and joy. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Line Gauthier September 18, 2017 at 4:33 PM very exotic poetry - wonderfully crafted Susan Ashley September 18, 2017 at 6:58 PM Hi Line, I so appreciate your kind and lovely words and wonderful visit. Thank you for your comment. Warmest regards... Susan

Michael Tor September 17, 2017 at 12:56 AM Passion and did I say passionate. Nice write Susan. Susan Ashley September 17, 2017 at 2:16 PM Thank you Michael, for your wonderful and kind words and for stopping by and taking the time to read my poem. Much appreciation. Have a lovely day! :)

Robert Lindley August 1, 2017 at 12:08 PM LOVE THE IMAGERY, DEPTH OF PASSION IN THIS CREATIVE ROMANTIC PIECE. Magnificent closing too.. A fav.. Susan Ashley August 1, 2017 at 3:44 PM Hi Robert, I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your beautiful comment, I so appreciate your kind encouraging words and the Fav! :)

Akkina Downing July 26, 2017 at 12:49 PM Oh soooo lovely and swelling with romance ;) good luck dear Susan... hugs :) Susan Ashley July 26, 2017 at 7:19 PM Hi Akkina, thank you so much for your comment. It made me swell with pride... hugs :)

Heidi Sands July 26, 2017 at 7:22 AM Very well written Susan. :) I love the ending. Good luck in the contest! Susan Ashley July 26, 2017 at 7:17 PM Hi Heidi, thank you so much! I'm glad you loved the ending :)

Winged Warrior July 25, 2017 at 11:24 PM A romantic poem heavenly made...great write Susan...^WW^ Susan Ashley July 26, 2017 at 3:19 PM Thank you WW for taking the time to read my poem and for commenting so kindly on it. I very much appreciate it! :)