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Heavenly Romance

Luminesence besprinkles fantasies on liquid love surrounding us. Riding the ebb and flow, we rock we lull, we ripple in the reverberations of our aphrodisia. Salty breezes teases our excitement as we salute Venus with sexual gifts. Moonlight waltzes scintillant riffles across the glass-sea surface to the bateau we sail; as we dance, rumba romance in rhythmic swells, on our Little Piece of Heaven. Susan Ashley July 25, 2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2017 2:12:00 PM

No rhyme this time round, Susan, but who cares when you make up for it with other beautiful and captivating techniques. Very romantic. You have the gift of words, fantasy and imagination! ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/8/2017 6:40:00 PM

Paul, your alluring comment is 'heavenly'. Your appealing thoughts and words warmly touch my heart and soul and inspire me to reach new heights. You also know how to put a smile (:big smile:) on my face. Thank you for your glowing appreciation and for your shining light and joy. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/18/2017 4:33:00 PM

very exotic poetry - wonderfully crafted

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/18/2017 6:58:00 PM

Hi Line, I so appreciate your kind and lovely words and wonderful visit. Thank you for your comment. Warmest regards... Susan

Michael Tor

Date: 9/17/2017 12:56:00 AM

Passion and did I say passionate. Nice write Susan.

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2017 2:16:00 PM

Thank you Michael, for your wonderful and kind words and for stopping by and taking the time to read my poem. Much appreciation. Have a lovely day! :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2017 12:08:00 PM

LOVE THE IMAGERY, DEPTH OF PASSION IN THIS CREATIVE ROMANTIC PIECE. Magnificent closing too.. A fav..

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/1/2017 3:44:00 PM

Hi Robert, I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your beautiful comment, I so appreciate your kind encouraging words and the Fav! :)