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Heavenly Necklace stars are extraterrestrial diamonds draped around a neck of sky to decorate the night Kimo Contest Sponsored by Rick Parise 10/10/16

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Date: 10/18/2016 5:08:00 PM
Youve painted a pretty view with your out of the world description ;)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/19/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 10/17/2016 12:03:00 AM
Very out there - lol Really beautifully written Janis - thanks for this. Regards, Mark
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/17/2016 5:14:00 PM
Thanks, Mark.
Date: 10/16/2016 7:26:00 PM
I love your metaphor. It brightly shines. BIG congrats, Janis.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/16/2016 9:21:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 10/16/2016 2:14:00 PM
wow Janis, this is amazingly written, I love it my fave in the contest..just gorgeous imagery lovely lady :) Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/16/2016 6:37:00 PM
Thanks, luloo.
Date: 10/16/2016 2:01:00 PM
Both metaphor and personification stand out, Janis. This makes for a heavenly win:) Congratulations! Regards // paul
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/16/2016 6:39:00 PM
Thanks Paul. Blessings as always, Janis. Good to hear from you.
Date: 10/16/2016 1:49:00 PM
Hearty congrats on your great win dear Janis, lovely description of stars, lovely metaphor, nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/16/2016 6:40:00 PM
Nice to hear from you again. Thanks and blessings. Janis
Date: 10/10/2016 5:52:00 PM
Wow! That is a beautiful description of the title of your poem.For me this is a good read Janis.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/16/2016 6:42:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene.

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