Heavenly Lust

Heaven has an extremely large bust
That drives mortal men wild with Lust
But when the girls are free
They drop to her knees
Under-wire support is a must.


L&H Limerick contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 12:07 PM
Flowing words emanating the tender peace of a calm slow running river. Thanks for this brilliant share.
Cervenka Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Lol, thanks Funom
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 9:01 PM
In heaven we trust. :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 3:30 PM
this is funny!! MIght I suggest you put quotes around "the girls" ? At first I was getting some naughty ideas thinking of something else your poem could be saying!!(the last line, however, makes all obvious!!)
Cervenka Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 12:34 AM
Well where was your mind Andrea?? Lol. Point taken though. Its an easy enough change. Thanks for the suggestion!
Aniagyei Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 4:28 AM
looool..... nice one, Janet!! ..... puts a smile on my face today
Cervenka Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Wilfred. The revisit put one on mine as well..
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 9:24 AM
ha ha ha great one Janet good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Cervenka Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Thanks Jan! These are a blast to read!
Smith Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 9:22 AM
lol.....glad I don't need that.
Cervenka Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 11:31 AM
So unfair that guys never need wires in their underwear...LOL ;-D
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