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Heavenly Lust

Heaven has an extremely large bust That drives mortal men wild with Lust But when the girls are free They drop to her knees Under-wire support is a must. L&H Limerick contest Sponsored by Catie Lindsey

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Date: 1/28/2016 12:07:00 PM
Flowing words emanating the tender peace of a calm slow running river. Thanks for this brilliant share.
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 1/28/2016 6:18:00 PM
Lol, thanks Funom
Date: 6/18/2015 9:01:00 PM
In heaven we trust. :)
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Date: 6/8/2015 3:30:00 PM
this is funny!! MIght I suggest you put quotes around "the girls" ? At first I was getting some naughty ideas thinking of something else your poem could be saying!!(the last line, however, makes all obvious!!)
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 6/9/2015 12:34:00 AM
Well where was your mind Andrea?? Lol. Point taken though. Its an easy enough change. Thanks for the suggestion!
Date: 5/26/2015 4:28:00 AM
looool..... nice one, Janet!! ..... puts a smile on my face today
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/26/2015 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Wilfred. The revisit put one on mine as well..
Date: 5/21/2015 9:24:00 AM
ha ha ha great one Janet good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/21/2015 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Jan! These are a blast to read!
Date: 5/21/2015 9:22:00 AM
lol.....glad I don't need that.
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/21/2015 11:31:00 AM
So unfair that guys never need wires in their underwear...LOL ;-D