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Heavenly Cats

HEAVENLY CATS

cats sizzle with top hats and canes.
ties spinning.

the feline’s tail held extra high.
whiskers whisked clean
with scrub-brush tongue.

black cats outlined in the astrological sky.
white cats often need to be laundered.
calico’s careen from seat to seat.
Persian’s not too sweet.

a precious find in a tree —
taking home the whole
cat and caboodle.

marvelous kitten’s meow,
lighting up a toddler’s eyes.
Mohawk is his name.

a downsize caused Mohawk to roam
but the heart remembers
and searches for his descendants.

curled up on a rug-size lap,
somewhere out there.

8/7/2018

3rd place/multiple placements
Cats poetry contest (Tania Kitchin)

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Date: 8/14/2018 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Unique with great imagery. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 8/12/2018 3:42:00 PM
Such a sweet poem Kim. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 8/12/2018 10:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 8/12/2018 4:46:00 AM
Nicely done, great imagery, congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2018 5:53:00 AM
Thank you, Tania! :)
Date: 8/8/2018 1:54:00 PM
This is loaded with such awesome imagery. What a fun write!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2018 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 8/8/2018 3:08:00 AM
Had an image of top cat in your opening line, lovely creatures, very independent. Good luck Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2018 5:42:00 AM
:) Thanks, Tom!
Date: 8/7/2018 11:54:00 PM
Love the imagery and the way you wrote the verse .. luck in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2018 5:43:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!

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