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HEAVEN THROUGH THE EYES - - a collab with JA Fraser

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This muse is inspired by some conversations about heaven and some Biblical verses I read about heaven in the book of Revelation.. 

HEAVEN THROUGH THE EYES Won't you tell me places called heaven on earth? for so long, so long, I tried to search and search Come east. Come west. North to south, I all reach. my quest began since day of my birth. . . It's pre-historic paleolithic age, this beautiful place Karnataka's architecture amidst it's greenery. Heaven through my eyes seeing such scenery to walk it's ground my thoughts gently grace. Meandering many miles from a dripping spring, the Fraser River in it's glory catches my eye, heaven through my eyes as I stand nearby to hear it's lapping waters as it sings. This magnificent fissure, one of earth's abyss, the Grand Canyon on the Colorado Plateau. Heaven through my eyes, in erosion flow resided the ancient Pueblo whom lived in bliss. Supple strong arms cradle me from harm Salty tears they slowly fall, to flood cracking gradually sadness that long clog Heaven reveal to my eyes your charm behold thee not by a necklace of glitter but a love so peaceful and oh so tender that 'til this life is through I'll remember no longer do I want ever be shut! as all these infuse in me reasons to smile and again take a look at yellow horizons with it's curly shaped clouds white and some blue Heaven is revealed to my eyes by the presence of you! Evergreen leaves so lush cluster among trees Daisies, magnolias, orchids they paint a beauty Ocean blue touch the sea's face of purity Heaven through my eyes displayed for free! Beyond this life, beyond this whole wide world-- do you believe a place called heaven up there? If you do, won't you tell me a clue to exactly know where and what to do for so long, so long there I like to curl? ©J. A. Fraser and O. E. Guillermo 01:00 pm, December 26, 2014

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Date: 3/29/2015 10:18:00 PM
Olive, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2015 2:18:00 PM
Congrats to you both on a write I can't get out of my head!
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you. Consider entering this into my Tell Me contest, it would fit perfectly.
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:13:00 AM
The very heart of this poem is love. It exudes love of all creation. Inspirational and definitely heavenly. Big congrats on this top winner, Olive! Hugs, Kimberly xx
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Date: 3/22/2015 8:45:00 AM
Beautiful, Olive. I can see heaven through your eyes! Congratulations on your win! Hugs! :) Kim
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/15/2015 4:07:00 AM
thanks much Kim.. =`)
Date: 3/22/2015 8:41:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Olive_eloi!!:) Very merited, too. We're both on the winners' list..weeeeeeee!!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:20:00 AM
thanks much Paul.. I thank you so much for stopping by. :)! hugs and hugs.. :D!
Date: 3/21/2015 7:17:00 PM
Olive, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Old Men In Blue Jeans" if you'd like. Enjoy your win, LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda for giving this a place.. :) Take care always.. :D! hugs and hugs to you LOlly Linda.. :)
Date: 1/6/2015 6:34:00 PM
It is so great to see you two found each other on here to do a collaboration together. there are many such places that are heaven on earth for us!!
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:59:00 AM
it is ANdie.. it's the truth.. :)! GBU
Date: 1/4/2015 6:53:00 AM
A top rating for this lovely collaboration. For those who look closely enough there is already heaven on earth...and for those who believe, there is a more magnificent heaven where His presence surpasses all beauty. One clue to get there is obey the commandment of love! // paul
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thanks much PAul.. :)! in the old testament, ten commandments are enumerated, but particularly in Deuteronomy and in the NEw Testament, Jesus summarizes it with first Loving God and Loving our neighbors.. :)! this the two commandments.. :O thanks much for this generous comment.. You nailed it!
Date: 1/2/2015 3:09:00 PM
Firstly, may I wish you and your family a Healthy 2015. I so enjoyed writing this poem with you Olive, and with Heaven being the theme made it that more special. Let's knock heads together soon to tackle another using a different theme when you have time. Blessings always for you, James :) x :)
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Date: 1/4/2015 1:27:00 AM
thanks much JAmes.. Appreciate it.. :)!