Heaven On Earth

Which part of earth do I stand?
An exotic  heaven etched by His Holy Hand!
Heart leaps and wriggles beneath with rapture,
spirits go high to dance in this exquisite land.

Behold!beyond the heavenly waters,the seven towering hills,
with poetic words my heart fills
where to glance foremost ,thereof I know not,
they hold me captive,with their picturesque stills.

Hues and shades of green and yellow,
prosperous and breathtaking this land so mellow,
unsolicited luck or a surreal dream,
hardly can I believe,this poor little fellow!

Crystal clear the water that flows,
reflects the endless sky and Sun that glows,
zealous zephyrs frolic with pine twigs,
glances with plea at the plunging auburn disc and reluctantly blows.

Cloudlessly stand the sky so high,
birds still perch down,unwilling to fly
from this dreamy land of eternal beauty,
and love and harmony,secretly I whisper,'so do I'!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/27/2011 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this great contest..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:48:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Meera. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Meera
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:55:00 AM
Many Congrats Meera on your super win with this wonderful piece on nature's beauty.Love, gautami
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:21:00 AM
Great to see your success in the top ten with this lovely poem Meera. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 5:49:00 PM
copngratulations Meera for your win with this delightful piece. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:48:00 PM
Heaven on Earth is exactly what this site appears to be, Meera. Excellent poem. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations Meera on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congrats Meera on your wonderful win in John's contest with this perfect poem using the new form... amazing words and message.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your fourth place win Meera (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on 4th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:59:00 AM
Beautiful, Meera. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:00:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Meera. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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