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Heaven Is This

~~~ The roof top, the shingles, the rain as it falls, hypnotic tempos I hear Laying together, safe from the storm, hiding away every fear Spending this evening with you by the fire, kissing your lips in the light Feeling your warmth, the endless desire, all is aglow on this night Fingertips roam in blushing excitement, tender the features I trace Smiles illumine softly the darkness, quickly my heart it does race Deeper affection, hotter than summer, movements of rhythmic design Sighs of emotion, echoing sweetly, sensual love we define Whispered intentions, fervor ignited, skin upon skin as we breathe Lost in your passion neath woolen blankets, heaven is this I believe ~~~

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/15/2019 8:42:00 AM

This sounds like heaven; a delicate write that is also marvelously sensuous Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2019 9:03:00 AM

Thank you so very much Caren.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/14/2019 9:01:00 PM

I like that you added woolen blankets in your final verse. Makes the imagery pop!

Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2019 9:03:00 AM

Thank you Kim, I guess I got could towards the end. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/14/2019 2:05:00 PM

A comforting poem that does sound like heaven. Well written Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2019 9:02:00 AM

Thank you so very much my dear friend. I appreciate your visit and kindness always.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/14/2019 4:02:00 AM

Fervent, beautiful and emotional perceptive feeling of what heaven is for those who believe and have faith ... great written my dear friend, salute alkas

Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2019 9:02:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your kind words.

Hello There

Date: 9/14/2019 12:40:00 AM

Sizzling write, Chris ~ oh, what a night!

Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2019 9:01:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend. "Oh what a night" now I will have that song stuck in my head. : )

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/13/2019 8:59:00 PM

Wowza, way to turn up the heat on a Friday night my friend. Heaven isn’t supposed to be so hot but it is supposed to be beautiful and this one certainly isn’t lacking in beauty or romance! Excellent penning :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2019 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. I am happy you enjoyed my little romantic escape for a Friday evening. I appreciate you my friend.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/13/2019 7:32:00 PM

Errrrr ok then! I just tell you how take you us through all kind of emotions like we are on this adventure with you and then you write this one? Oh my my my! See you are not writing fair now! Wow got hot in here real quick! Phew! Me thinks it's shower time!;) so very unfair! Lol! The most beautiful Poem I have read on here in a very very long time! Ok I'm not even going to reread this because I feel I've walked into a place only two should go!;) loved it of course! ;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2019 8:58:00 AM

Thanks so very much Brenda. Your words are always so kind to me and something I look forward to just as much as I look forward to your beautiful poetry. Thank you again.