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Heaven and Earth Kuhlmann Sonnet

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Blindingly bright: flames devour rocky: the cliff. Provide shape: pace matter falter: into skiff. Flaring lava: falls spinelike leaps: as waterfall.  Mother nature: monstrous farce vast: peak tall.  Roused dawn: shine grace glide: from sky. Sloughing paints: bright shades blaze: the eye. Scalding steam: flow plunge strong: daze lava. Erupting volcano: crater flame scent: the java! Defiant against: posh rough notched: the assault Cherry blossom: tree gripping charged: a fault Growing proud: bright shades stark: the sight Nature endearing: lovers blooms lust: the blight 1st place contest winner Written: March 06, 2023 Upto You Again Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Kuhlmann is a poem of two phrases interspersed with three related monosyllabic stem- words(nouns, adjectives, etc)with an integral title. The label and form are derived from the baroque poet Qiorinus Kuhlmann's special sonnet form Love-kiss XLI/ Inspired by the poem KUHLMANN the form written by Poet: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/9/2023 1:05:00 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win with this difficult form. Your imagery of fiery volcanos and the formation of new land in"spines" is just one illustration of your poetic skill. Blessings dear friend!
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Date: 3/8/2023 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Sara
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Date: 3/8/2023 9:06:00 AM
You are so wonderfully gifted and adept in every form of poetry. Congratulations on your first place win dear Lasaad.
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Date: 3/7/2023 6:48:00 AM
You shine in every form--poetry seems so easy for you my friend.
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Date: 3/7/2023 2:33:00 AM
- Las, you master all forms of poetry ... I dare not even try ... - Beautiful poem in every way :) - hugs
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Date: 3/6/2023 1:10:00 PM
What a challenge this must have been to write. It was beautiful!
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