Heaven

His lovely wife is named Heaven
She scolds him seventy times seven
Yet, Big Joe just never really cared
In Heaven he lives happily, hearing impaired!


Stacey Brown 2-6-14
Dr. Ram Mehta contest
Husbands are in heaven
whose wives scold not
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Oyewole Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 1:44 PM
Lol.. Nicely done, Stacy! Congrats on your fine win!!
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Thank you Abdilhafe! Blessings, Stacey
Gorelick Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Yours is similar to mine..wrting about the hearing impaired. lol...Congrats to you. BG
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 7:09 PM
fun take on this poem challenge, Stacey, congratulations on your win!
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:35 AM
thank you for you kind words! Blessings, Stacey
Van Akkeren Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Brilliant loved it congratulations on your win
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Huberta! Blessings, Stacey
Onclaud Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 12:48 PM
reat humor spicing the theme.stacey.. congrats!
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Nette, blessings to you and yours, Stacey
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Cute! Congrats.
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks for you Richard! Blessings, Stacey
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 9:06 AM
Stacey congratulations on your well deserved win I enjoyed this clerihew, nicely done -Connie
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Thank you for your kid words! many Blessings to you and yours, Stacey
Kayode Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 4:39 AM
Congrats on the win Stacey . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Thank you so much for your kinds words, definitely well received! many Blessings to you and yours
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:46 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, stacey
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:41 AM
Thank you again Dr. Ram for another fun contest! Blessings to you and yours, Stacey
Poteet Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Cute twist there at the end. I like the move into heaven following the prompt. It was heaven on earth for him too while he was with her. I love the clerihew as a form and yours in particular.
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 9:36 AM
thank you so much for your kind words! many Blessings, Stacey
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 11:46 AM
- Stacey, great clerihew - well done for the contest - Good luck ! - Hope you win. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Brown Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Thank you very much Anne Lise for the very kind words! blessings to you my friend from God the Father and our Lord Jesus Christ! xoxo, Stacey
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