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Heaven

As I'd entered with my arms outstretched I'd submitted myself to a lifelong commitment, to all the pearls I'm permitted; treasures of heaven I have fitted. My home in heaven is the ultimate dream. In the parlor my husband sits with a starry gleam, joined by my dad, sister, grandparents, and friends all laughing as a team. A balm of perfection, a crystal-clear sea, glorious blooms in the field of an emerald forest, paradise to me, full of God's animals small and large in one place to see. A home with new and perfect body. Everyone is gentle and sweet never to compete with anybody. No more sorrow or crying, nor anger. No more pain or death. No more hunger. No more broken promises nor a broken heart. Wherever we are, we're never apart. Cool summers all year round, always just right. Calvary's love that burns bright, there is no lack of kindliness; Christ has made us worthy of all of it with His forgiveness. 8/21/2018

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Date: 9/19/2018 3:02:00 AM
I absolutely love reading your description of heaven, we are will be reunited with our beloved ones, what I wonder is that will it be a emotional scene but again heaven is free of tears so that scene must have to be of immense beauty, right? Anyways many congratulations on your wonderful position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 9/17/2018 5:32:00 PM
How lovely, Eve! Your idea of heaven and mine are very similar. I'm not surprised by your placement in the contest. Congrats.
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Date: 9/16/2018 6:29:00 PM
Beautifully written, Eve, about the wonder and perfection Heaven will grant us. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/16/2018 1:32:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Eve. Well done.
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Date: 8/26/2018 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful poem Eve..
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Date: 8/22/2018 9:34:00 PM
Your poem of Heaven is exquisite and heartfelt Eve. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Date: 8/22/2018 5:13:00 AM
A great poem I would say... this is really written from the heart. Christ has prepared a castle for you in heaven. .. keep on looking up. Augustus
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