Heaven -

Holy place above stars Heals all wounds and all scars Happy winds gently blow Hearts do love with full glow Hopefuls dwell joyfully Heroes live peacefully Heaven is harmony H or R Pleiades Poetry Contest 1st place

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Terry Miller

Date: 9/9/2023 12:53:00 AM

Beautiful; congratulations.

R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/9/2023 7:11:00 PM

Thank you very much...

R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/9/2023 2:42:00 AM

Thank you very much...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/8/2023 5:30:00 AM

This is so creative, reverent, and beautiful, Roger. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/8/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thank you very much... The rhyming was a challenge...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2023 1:49:00 AM

- "Heaven is harmony" ... - Congratulations on your win, Roger :) -

R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/8/2023 3:32:00 AM

Thank you very much...

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/7/2023 5:31:00 PM

I like this, Roger! You even made it rhyme! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/7/2023 8:30:00 PM

Thank you very much... Making it rhyme was a challenge...

Joseph May

Date: 9/7/2023 3:45:00 PM

Very nicely penned Roger, Congrats on your win

R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/7/2023 8:28:00 PM

Thank you very much... As always...