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Heat Rises High

heat rises high up
yet the top of the mountain
is covered with snow.

January 27, 2018

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Valsa George

Date: 5/1/2023 1:39:00 AM

That happens, Vijay. Beyond a certain altitude, it will be icy chill. A great haiku.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2022 9:10:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. Amazing natural phenomenon. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/11/2019 2:06:00 PM

Hi Vijay, this wonderful Haiku shows me such wonderful images. How I love to look upon majestic mountains. Excellent Haiku my friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/1/2018 3:15:00 PM

You project a lovely image, Vijay. This has a metaphorical flavor to it...contrasting emotions. ~ I've been on snow covered mountains where I even managed to get sunburnt. This reminds me of an old Italian song called 'Ghiaccio Bollente"...Boiling Ice. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thank you Paul..enjoyed reading about your experience..so true!

Maria Williams

Date: 2/1/2018 6:50:00 AM

This Haiku fills me with the image of Mt Fuji in Japan. Great Haiku Vijay...Maria

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2018 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Maria.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/31/2018 5:09:00 PM

Good haiku, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2018 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Janice.

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 1/31/2018 2:10:00 PM

Cool Vijay. I get your your contrasting environments.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/31/2018 4:48:00 PM

Thank you Ronald.

Sneha Rv

Date: 1/30/2018 10:01:00 AM

What a sight, this is a lovely meaningful haiku :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/31/2018 4:48:00 PM

Thank you Sneha.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/29/2018 9:28:00 AM

I have to think about this, Vijay and find the meanings for me, well done !!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2018 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Mike.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2018 1:00:00 AM

- Very well done, Vijay ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2018 6:18:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 1/28/2018 8:58:00 PM

i've never thought of this before, great thoughts Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2018 6:18:00 AM

Thank you Lewis.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2018 8:57:00 PM

I really liked seeing this one tonight, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2018 6:18:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Edward Mccall

Date: 1/28/2018 5:50:00 PM

so much to be gleaned from so few words. Well said Vijay well said.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2018 6:18:00 AM

Thank you Edward.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/28/2018 2:46:00 PM

Profound my friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 3:06:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios.

Silent One

Date: 1/28/2018 2:23:00 PM

Deep haiku..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 3:06:00 PM

Thank you Silent One.

Roy Pett

Date: 1/28/2018 1:58:00 PM

Great Haiku Vijay, creates marvellous images. :))

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 3:05:00 PM

Thank you Roy..appreciate your comments.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/28/2018 1:21:00 PM

I like this Vijay! Creatively written and I can see it here, where the mountains are. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 3:05:00 PM

Glad to read your comments..thank you Heidi.

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/28/2018 12:08:00 PM

Very well done Vijay!! We can always expect snow at the top!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Gary..appreciate your comments.

James Swartz

Date: 1/28/2018 11:26:00 AM

Yes Vijay i can see mountain tops from my house and they have snow while it is quite warm today. A great poem to start my day.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 3:04:00 PM

Appreciate your comments--thank you James.

Joseph May

Date: 1/28/2018 7:52:00 AM

Nicely expressed Vijay...best wishes

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/27/2018 6:46:00 PM

Like this! I find my eyes drifting upward!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 6:51:00 AM

Thank you Kim--appreciate your comments.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/27/2018 5:53:00 PM

That's the way I would like to be...Enjoyed this...Al the best Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Arturo..always happy to read your comments.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/27/2018 4:46:00 PM

ohh, vijay... beautiful grasp of climate change's polarity...fascinating work... huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 6:50:00 AM

Appreciate your comments, nette..many thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/27/2018 4:28:00 PM

very cleverly penned Vijay:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Jan..enjoyed reading your comments.

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