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sizzling is the heat blistering and sweltering . . . cold cascading rain __________________________________ July 16, 2013 Poetry/Haiku/heat Copyright Protected, ID 07-4930-42-16 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/23/2013 6:32:00 PM

Heat followed by refreshing relief from that heat...Great contrast Constance!...SO glad to see you posting and winning contests again (as usual)...I know you don't like to comment but you and I have been friends for so long and it makes my day when I hear from you...So please Constance please-please-please?? (Pretty please?)

Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/23/2013 6:34:00 PM

Remember when we used to Soup Mail back and forth and discuss poetry?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:42:00 PM

I love this contrast. It would feel so good on a sizzling hot day. Congrats in the contest, Constance.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/22/2013 8:26:00 PM

fine 'ku, cnstance.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/22/2013 6:44:00 PM

congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2013 2:43:00 PM

Great work that matches some of our weather this year..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 12:47:00 PM

Always welcome rain.....congratulations on this win

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 11:38:00 AM

Constance congratulations on your win.Loved your haiku.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:43:00 AM

Constance congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:10:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality Constance !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/21/2013 10:54:00 PM

Can almost feel it. Lovely. Many congrats Constance.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:01:00 PM

Constance :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

Jack Horne

Date: 7/20/2013 10:02:00 AM

oh, I'm longing for the rain part! England is sweltering right now (so unusual for us)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/16/2013 9:32:00 PM

Well done! Ill bet it will be a winner..BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/16/2013 8:08:00 PM

This is a glorious and delightful write my friend! You have encased me into the Haiku by you great wording that you have used! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a lovely piece, such a harmonious poem, Great Work!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/16/2013 2:03:00 PM

A beautiful haiku..So.nice to.find your verses again dear