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Heat

Heat It is hot! The air above me suffocates, lacking breeze. This July eve, the heat affects me most. Tomorrow, I will end one affiliation and begin anew. The future causes my brow to arch, the heat adding to my discomfort. This house, my home is large and strong, but may not survive the coming storm. All before me, I must be willing to cede as a consequence of this nights decisions. I feel the heat began to crescendo into a fire storm. I envision myself appearing at the very gates of Hell. I finish my dress and put on my coat realizing, soon, this will be my home no longer. I will be branded a traitor in my native country, a patriot in my new. As I sit in the Congress, I am alone if not for Jefferson and my Congressional Secretary. The document prepared by Jefferson beckons my signature. I am overcome with emotion as I, John Hancock, President of the Congress, slowly, in large bold script, sign The Declaration of Independence. As I return to my home, I realize this heat will not go away for a long time. I return to say goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/6/2010 6:57:00 AM
Congrats Mac on your HM in the freedom and liberty contest.. with this outstanding write.. enjoy your very special honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on vacation.. AlohA...
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations Mac on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Liberty and Freedom to Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/1/2010 6:35:00 AM
I felt the heat in this poem ... excellent write Mac... u might want to check out your contest post... it has disappeared and I know I entered my poem last night so something may have happened ..a glitch of some kind.. check it out .. your blog has also mentioned this too.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/31/2010 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations Mac, on your Honorable Mention in The Rambling Poet’s Courage Poetry contest with these most blessed words creatively shared. Your patriotism is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/30/2010 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations Mac on your win in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2010 8:33:00 AM
Wonderfully written, and a well deserved win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/30/2010 7:47:00 AM
being a patriot, i am very honored. thank you for understanding history and writing about it so creatively. i would trust you to teach my children. John Henry Loving III and if any body ask you. you tell them this should have won first place.
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Date: 1/30/2010 7:43:00 AM
interesting imaginative write, Mac. Congratulations on your win. Robert
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