Hearts

hearts pounding the room still vibrating night lingering on Submitted on February 12, 2018 for contest ROMANTIC POEM sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 3RD

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2018 11:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Line, great Senryu ! Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 11:20:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2018 3:23:00 AM

- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Line :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/12/2018 11:51:00 PM

Congratulations, Line on your win with a vibrant haiku.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Subimal. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Silent One

Date: 2/12/2018 5:35:00 PM

A passionate haiku Line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, SO. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2018 11:25:00 AM

- Woow, the last line is hot Line :) - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 1:40:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciate your visit and meteorological comment. LOL

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/12/2018 9:45:00 AM

Very romantic, Line Last line is my favorite Good Luck xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 10:01:00 AM

Thank you, Mike Much appreciated.