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Hearth and Flame a Memoir

. The orange and gold leaves are falling, days are shortening, a little more everyday. The chill in the air and brisk wind tells us to prepare for the cold. Daddy makes grumbling children gather the firewood onto the porch from the wood shed. Brother makes us get enough for the week so we don't have to get the wood in again till the next week. The splinters are the worse part of carrying wood to the house, spending time with my brother, Robbie, is the best. Robbie is four years older than me, and much wiser, secretly he is my hero, though I would never tell him that piece of information; he would use it against me and his ego is already big enough! First thing each morning, we all gather around the fire after our parents get it burning; rooting in like hogs to the teat to get the middle spot. The middle spot gets heat on three sides, and also was the center of attention. As the flames rose and kissed our cheeks a rosy hue, it was then that we had to turn to our back side to prevent permanent, scorching to the face and clothes. Little times in life, such as these, stand out to me as I get older, and make my memories sweeter. The people who loved me, not the accomplishments in my job nor my talents, warm my memories today. The heat source was really important in our home, as you can see, in more ways than one; the heat we all seek and need for survival, but also a camaraderie developed between siblings watching the burning logs and seeking warmth. My eyes saw the flames, tall and short, red and yellow. Charcoal embers radiate the red glow, as they become ashes that are poured out on the ground, which was also a chore of the children, with much grumbling and complaining... Today I stand by the hearth with my new family, watching the embers turn the wood black then red and into grey ash dust. I feel the warmth and remember my childhood; it is a fond memory. The heat is needed and welcome on aching joints. The flame grows higher and becomes alive before my eyes, dancing. I remember a bush that was not consumed by the fire. This wood is being consumed slowly before my eyes. Memories are alive like the flames; memories become written stories to pass the time and keep my sweet memories alive in time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/10/2010 6:13:00 PM
nice narrative i enjoyed it and saw the flames in my memory. john h loving iii
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:22:00 PM
Nothing like a wood fire...brings one back to the cave! Have you read the Books Clan of Cave Bear? You'd love them! Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:14:00 PM
Doris..I really like this one!!! It could warm up any cold winter morning..I love a fire and a fire place...liked the way that you brought out the warmth in your family and childhood..great write, I will look forward to the rest of the story..Thanks Danny
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:15:00 AM
Lovely account of your childhood memories, Doris. Preparing for winter may seem like a lot of work, but it surely brought your family together. I love this narrative and look forward to the next part! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:50:00 AM
I'm loving this nostalgic write....it warms the heart just as those warm embers warm your memories. :)
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:28:00 AM
Great write. Sent you an email about the errors that I saw. Remember those days. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the critique on mine. Mom
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:14:00 AM
you write about childhood like it was yesterday. i originally wrote after the fires about the aftermath of war, but your comment changed the tone for me. i imagine falling asleep by a campfire as a kid now when i read it. thanks for the kind comments. i really enjoy your poetry =) Katy
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:13:00 AM
Doris, you are a great story teller. I can envision this wonderful little family memory of yours. I too recall those days with such nostalgia, the days of youth! And fire is such a great symbol of hearth and warmth. Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:59:00 AM
Write on Doris Write on. Outstanding. Love, Carol (You will have Soupmail soon)
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