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Heartbroken Howl

I'm tired of feeling only anguish and sheer pain time will make it fade

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Roberthenry Poulin

Date: 8/18/2013 1:00:00 PM

Speaking of titles for haiku or senryu or tanka, always the first line is always the title of the poem and that is how the haiku community and searches for these poems find the poem. Robert Henry Poulin, Sebastian, Florida

Kayla Obrien
Date: 8/18/2013 4:32:00 PM

I will remember that thank you.

Roberthenry Poulin

Date: 8/18/2013 12:58:00 PM

I feel much anguish in your poetry, the essence of inner struggles with sadness. I like the way you gave closure and the hope of time to make it heal. The 3rd line jumps out and solves the situation however sad the poem makes us feel for our hurt, we know you have solved the problem that "...time will make it fade." That 3 line makes us feel good knowing how you understand your hurt will go away with time. It is subtle justaposition. Robert Henry Poulin.

Faith Elizabeth Brigham

Date: 8/9/2013 12:26:00 PM

I forgotten to mention how much I like your title also. It is very catchy!

Kayla Obrien
Date: 8/9/2013 12:29:00 PM

Thank you for your comments :-)

Faith Elizabeth Brigham

Date: 8/9/2013 12:25:00 PM

I like how you drew hope out at the end of this poem. Very nicely done.