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Heartbroken Howl

I'm tired of feeling
only anguish and sheer pain
time will make it fade

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Roberthenry Poulin

August 18, 2013 at 1:00 PM

Speaking of titles for haiku or senryu or tanka, always the first line is always the title of the poem and that is how the haiku community and searches for these poems find the poem. Robert Henry Poulin, Sebastian, Florida

Kayla Obrien

August 18, 2013 at 4:32 PM

I will remember that thank you.

Roberthenry Poulin

August 18, 2013 at 12:58 PM

I feel much anguish in your poetry, the essence of inner struggles with sadness. I like the way you gave closure and the hope of time to make it heal. The 3rd line jumps out and solves the situation however sad the poem makes us feel for our hurt, we know you have solved the problem that "...time will make it fade." That 3 line makes us feel good knowing how you understand your hurt will go away with time. It is subtle justaposition. Robert Henry Poulin.