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Heartbroken

You were the first one on soup to greet, First poem on cover page was worth a treat ! You encouraged me to believe in myself, Dumped thoughts stepped forward from the last shelf ! Soon I found my heart was rhyming with you, I was at cloud nine, lovely comments came of the blue ! Slowly discovered that to all you were so kind, My sense of possession had turned me blind ! My subtle emotions , affection did swiftly flew, PD, heartbroken, I am breaking up with you ! Written on 13/6/14 Sponsor- PD A Contest- I am breaking up with you Ranked 3rd

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/22/2014 1:39:00 PM

Congrats on your great win my friend!!!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2014 9:37:00 PM

??? uuug.. of course, that's why I said I enjoyed your comment...PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2014 12:05:00 AM

thank you for the reply, I super love your reply....Linda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/21/2014 11:04:00 AM

Thanks Linda ! U urself invited breakups !!

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 5:55:00 PM

Dr Upma,, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/21/2014 11:07:00 AM

Thanks SKAT ! Wonder how wud she manage so many breakups ?

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/21/2014 11:05:00 AM

Tim Smith

Date: 6/20/2014 12:15:00 AM

This one is fabulous ...congrats Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/20/2014 1:02:00 AM

Thanks Tim !

Paul Callus

Date: 6/19/2014 5:49:00 PM

Very well written Upma! But heartbreak should not be too devastating seeing that you gained such a high placing! Congratulations!! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/19/2014 9:13:00 PM

I thot it was going to be the most devastating one ,, maybe topmost ! But then emotions didn't touch that high! Will Try to be more intense next time !Thanks for lovely comments n wishes Paul !

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations, Dr. Upma, on a well-deserved win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/19/2014 9:10:00 PM

Thnx Pandita for ur always lovely comments !

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/19/2014 6:59:00 AM

Congrats on a great win, Dr. Dharma!. Hugs. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/19/2014 9:08:00 PM

Thnx Arlene !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 6:47:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest,

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/19/2014 9:08:00 PM

Thnx Dr Ram !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/19/2014 6:13:00 AM

:) i love the take you did... :) yes Linda so sweet with everyone.. :) 1st and 3rd line are so touching.. :) Congratulations Dr. ;D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/19/2014 8:55:00 PM

Thanks Olive dear !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 1:05:00 AM

Dr Upma, nice winning poem, so silly, to turn away from true kindness, anyways, i give all the same respect poets offer and expose. (that's why I threw in this contest) I guess in a way, I don't stay or follow, a selfish pen, I try I try, but oh well, some poems don't taste the same, as they did, the first time I treated myself to a fresh new poem or poet... So yes, FLY, and open your eyes, why blind yourself from you... JK... hugs.. Anyways.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/19/2014 8:49:00 PM

Was an amazing theme Linda! Enjoyed imagining on our breakup , on the contrary more emotional the breakup , higher placing it got! N damn u enjoyed while we were having a heartbreak ! Thanks for liking mine n my placement !