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Heartbroken
Don’t cry because love has flown away, smile because you’ll love again someday.
Quote - Poet’s own. * * * Come my dear and sit awhile with me beneath this comforting willow tree Have a rest and let your mind be free of your heartbroken anxiety. Willows weep to glimpse the heartbroken and restore peace for mixed emotion A haven of calm serenity to restore shattered tranquility. Come listen and hear the sweet birdsong release anguish you've felt for so long Tears are healing in sorrow and pain allowing one’s heart to sing again. Someday it won't ever sting at all only the tenderness you'll recall For there's nothing lovelier truly than a love that meant so much to thee. Treasure the first whispered "I Love You" hold it near and dear, forever do Remembrance of a love's sweet refrain is a song played down memory lane. If only shared kisses could be kept they would overfill a treasure chest Every one a precious diamond gem fragments of the love they represent. Memories are truly heaven blessed moments much too precious to forget Warming one's heart in so many ways in glorious dreams of yesterdays. * * * * 26th February 2023 Writing Challenge -H Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Word choice - no. 2 heartbroken

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Date: 3/2/2023 12:25:00 AM
Belle, excellent writing, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, I like the image and your quote also, blessings, Constance
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/2/2023 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Constance, I enjoyed the challenge of writing for the contest… Belle
Date: 3/1/2023 7:48:00 AM
i love willow trees, and this is a very lovely poem - congrats on your contest win, and thank you for your kind comment on my work.:)
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Date: 2/28/2023 6:34:00 PM
this is poetry at its best, I love where you took the theme dear Belle, congrats on your big win, xo
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/2/2023 3:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Rose, most appreciated… Belle
Date: 2/28/2023 6:33:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Belle. Congratulations on your first place win! ~Charlie
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/2/2023 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Charles very much indeed… Belle
Date: 2/28/2023 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote/picture. Have a blessed day.............
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/28/2023 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Paula, have a blessed day yourself too… Belle
Date: 2/28/2023 9:37:00 AM
Back with big Congratulations, Belle, on the top-winning achievement; your poem is so lovely, and I really liked the way you depicted the striking metaphors.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/28/2023 3:14:00 PM
Thank you dear friend, I truly appreciate those comments… Belle
Date: 2/28/2023 9:12:00 AM
Your poem is so very lovely, Belle, along with very good advice. Congratulations on your First Place win!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/28/2023 3:15:00 PM
Thank you very much Ann, most grateful… Belle
Date: 2/28/2023 7:49:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Belle :) - Congratulations on your top first place in the contest :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/28/2023 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Hugs in return ~ Belle :)
Date: 2/27/2023 2:35:00 AM
Your poem is adorned with every thing that makes it beautiful. Best for a win.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/28/2023 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Victor, truly appreciated dear friend… Belle
Date: 2/26/2023 8:11:00 AM
Such a fantastic mind you have, Belle. With such eloquence, your striking metaphors and allure shed more beauty on your already beautiful writing. Absolutely amazing. Good luck and hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/26/2023 8:30:00 AM
Sotto thank you so much, my heart is touched. Blessings and hugs… Belle
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