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Heartbreak

my heart it seems, been ripped from my chest. sliced open the bone and tore from my breast. the heartache i feel i can't now describe, there's nothing for cover there's no where to hide it's fresh and it's open, the wound is so deep, the tears won't stop falling, they're hot on my cheek. i know we haven't known each other for long, i can't believe this numbing pain. it all feels so wrong. i know that they say that time heals all wounds. but they've never loved a man such as you. i wanted and needed your love "oh" so much, it's so sad to know i'll never more feel your touch i'll love you forever down deep in my heart, it's good-by my love, with heaviness i part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/10/2011 12:04:00 AM
This is really such a heartfelt write, Kelly -- you've brought that pain on the pages-- I hope you are doing well-- sent you soupmail...
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:24:00 PM
Ive been reading your work and you are a great writer!! I'd like to invite you to.. www.poeticvoice.ning.com We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We at Poetic Voice hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. I hope to see you there!
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:32:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your poetry today Kelly. I hope to get back soon to read more of your poetry. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:24:00 PM
sounds painful... I'm sure we've all felt it...
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