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Heartbeats Music

Across golden meadows Love rests in the sun Gently wrapping shadows Of two hands as one Daisies waving beside The edge of the brook Happy moments reside It takes just one look Beauty flowing around Shared together now Heartbeats music abound Heard for miles somehow Whispered kisses lifting Higher and higher Breezes slowly shifting Passion from nigher Heidi Sands 2/19/18 *Placed 2nd in the 88 Syllable Contest. Lines 1 and 3 – 3 words of 2 syllables. Lines 2 and 4, 5 syllables. ABAB

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/15/2018 9:57:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in your poem, Heidi, and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2018 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Eve! I appreciate your comment :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/15/2018 9:40:00 PM

This is immaculate imagery and flow, and an excellent write! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Heidi - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2018 7:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Gregory. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/14/2018 5:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful placement Heidi with this romantic entry! Just lovely! : ) xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2018 5:59:00 PM

Thank you Connie :)

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/14/2018 4:09:00 PM

Amazing talent, Heidi. Congratulations

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2018 4:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Rhoda :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/14/2018 10:14:00 AM

Beautiful verse Heidi, congratulations.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2018 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Tom. I appreciate your comment :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/20/2018 10:06:00 AM

So sweet and romantic, Heidi. I just love 'whispered kisses lifting" Beautiful, happy Tuesday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2018 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Tuesday :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/20/2018 7:17:00 AM

Wonderful in flow and imagery ... best wishes, Heidi ...

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Probir :)

Silent One

Date: 2/20/2018 6:45:00 AM

What an amazing poem and great use of the 88 syllables.. one of the best i have read for this contest...

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/19/2018 9:27:00 PM

An awesome write for the contest Heidi; Good luck in it!~Che :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2018 12:09:00 AM

Thank you Cheryl :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2018 7:45:00 PM

Excellent poem Heidi..a winning entry. It flows beautifully despite the syllable constraints.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2018 12:08:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/19/2018 7:43:00 PM

This has an easy feel to it...a soothing one...building up to a passion...Lovely read...All the best my friend

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2018 12:08:00 AM

Thank you Arturo :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/19/2018 6:35:00 PM

Your imagery is just beautiful. I have a weakness for daisies waving.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/19/2018 6:37:00 PM

Thank you Sunlite ! :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/19/2018 6:20:00 PM

reminded me of a scene from my own life with one exception...we tossed pennies in the creek with following wishes...thank you and your poem for giving me a moment of reflection

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/19/2018 6:26:00 PM

That is so sweet about the pennies in the creek with wishes! I am happy it brought a nice moment of reflection. :) I appreciate your comment .