Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Heartbeats Music

Across golden meadows
Love rests in the sun
Gently wrapping shadows
Of two hands as one

Daisies waving beside
The edge of the brook
Happy moments reside
It takes just one look

Beauty flowing around
Shared together now
Heartbeats music abound
Heard for miles somehow

Whispered kisses lifting
Higher and higher
Breezes slowly shifting
Passion from nigher

Heidi Sands

2/19/18

*Placed 2nd in the 88 Syllable Contest.
Lines 1 and 3 – 3 words of 2 syllables.  Lines 2 and 4, 5 syllables.  ABAB

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Eve Roper March 15, 2018 at 9:57 PM Wonderful imagery in your poem, Heidi, and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Heidi Sands March 16, 2018 at 7:43 AM Thank you Eve! I appreciate your comment :)

Gregory Richard Barden March 15, 2018 at 9:40 PM This is immaculate imagery and flow, and an excellent write! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Heidi - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3 Heidi Sands March 16, 2018 at 7:43 AM Thank you very much Gregory. :)

Connie Marcum Wong March 14, 2018 at 5:57 PM Congratulations on your wonderful placement Heidi with this romantic entry! Just lovely! : ) xxoo Heidi Sands March 14, 2018 at 5:59 PM Thank you Connie :)

Rhoda Tripp March 14, 2018 at 4:09 PM Amazing talent, Heidi. Congratulations Heidi Sands March 14, 2018 at 4:16 PM Thank you so much Rhoda :)

Tom Cunningham March 14, 2018 at 10:14 AM Beautiful verse Heidi, congratulations. Heidi Sands March 14, 2018 at 10:27 AM Thank you Tom. I appreciate your comment :)

Mike Gentile February 20, 2018 at 10:06 AM So sweet and romantic, Heidi. I just love 'whispered kisses lifting" Beautiful, happy Tuesday xxoo Heidi Sands February 20, 2018 at 10:16 AM Thank you Mike. Happy Tuesday :)

Probir Gupta February 20, 2018 at 7:17 AM Wonderful in flow and imagery ... best wishes, Heidi ... Heidi Sands February 20, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thank you Probir :)

Silent One February 20, 2018 at 6:45 AM What an amazing poem and great use of the 88 syllables.. one of the best i have read for this contest... Heidi Sands February 20, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thank you so much Silent One :)

Cheryl Hoffman February 19, 2018 at 9:27 PM An awesome write for the contest Heidi; Good luck in it!~Che :) Heidi Sands February 20, 2018 at 12:09 AM Thank you Cheryl :)

Vijay Pandit February 19, 2018 at 7:45 PM Excellent poem Heidi..a winning entry. It flows beautifully despite the syllable constraints. Heidi Sands February 20, 2018 at 12:08 AM Thank you Vijay :)

Arturo Michael February 19, 2018 at 7:43 PM This has an easy feel to it...a soothing one...building up to a passion...Lovely read...All the best my friend Heidi Sands February 20, 2018 at 12:08 AM Thank you Arturo :)

Sunlite Wanter February 19, 2018 at 6:35 PM Your imagery is just beautiful. I have a weakness for daisies waving. Heidi Sands February 19, 2018 at 6:37 PM Thank you Sunlite ! :)

Frederic Parker February 19, 2018 at 6:20 PM reminded me of a scene from my own life with one exception...we tossed pennies in the creek with following wishes...thank you and your poem for giving me a moment of reflection Heidi Sands February 19, 2018 at 6:26 PM That is so sweet about the pennies in the creek with wishes! I am happy it brought a nice moment of reflection. :) I appreciate your comment .