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Heartbeats

The melancholy howls echoes through the dark forest coldness clings to skin heartbeats infused with time souls intertwined with nature

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2015 5:07:00 PM

I found the imagery quite dark and chilling Angela - I like the way you created the tanka - i agree with Dave it is like steps:-) Hugs Jan xx

Angela Roark
Date: 3/3/2015 5:56:00 PM

wow thx Jan. i never wrote a Tanka poem before and this was my very first one recently :) Hugs Angela <3

Angela Roark

Date: 2/9/2015 9:52:00 PM

now u are getting me Lyric man. this is how i write :). i write with passion seeping throughout my soul. when i write i just let my mind go free . the pen is my dagger and the paper is my target. i have so many poems i have wrote for over two years now. i didn't start back writing until two years ago. i quit it when i turned 18. when i was 17 i wrote my first poem and won a poetry contest and was published by that one poem. for many years i stayed in the shadow until i wanted to come out.