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Heart Without Soul

Heart without a soul and mind deficient of love deserve each other. November 8, 2017

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2022 2:06:00 PM

You have got that one correct. I wonder what would happen to them? Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the kind reviews. Sara

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/10/2017 12:04:00 PM

Very wise Senryu, Vijay. Such poetic truth in those few words. Pure poetry. Love and smiles always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2017 5:07:00 PM

So true. Enjoyed seeing this one as well, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 6:51:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/8/2017 2:23:00 PM

Well-said, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 2:27:00 PM

Thanks Janice!

Silent One

Date: 11/8/2017 2:15:00 PM

Great senryu..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 2:27:00 PM

Thanks SO!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 11/8/2017 10:58:00 AM

Those are wrong words!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/8/2017 4:30:00 PM

The words are pain.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 1:18:00 PM

Thanks Patricia--I understand the sentiment!

Maria Williams

Date: 11/8/2017 6:57:00 AM

Some stone cold heart that would be Vijay. Love your Senryu. It speaks volumes in 3 small lines...Maria

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Maria!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2017 6:26:00 AM

Wow! So sad!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 1:20:00 PM

Meant in a positive way! Thanks Kim!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2017 6:05:00 AM

This is true, but oh so sad that it happens to some people! I really enjoyed your clever little Senryu! You have masterfully paired up two things I would never have happen in my life! This is something terrible to see, but so exquisitely expressed within your piece! Great Work my friend!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Russell!

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/8/2017 6:00:00 AM

100%...Born to be together...All the best, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Arturo!

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/8/2017 5:53:00 AM

A strong forward statement made in this Senryu. Well done Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Heidi!