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Heart Snow

…..There's never enough of you! This hunger goes on day and night. Who are you~ of course, I do know, But, I hide you from the world covered in an avalanche of heart  snow. It's a place, only you and I hide,  my Prince, your love eternal,    With me at your side. Oh, these words are so lacking in poetic imagery, As my fellow poets can do! I only write with a cadence and a metronome going. Ticking away the rhythm of this Divine thirst and longing for... Your highly desired,divine essence.

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Date: 3/12/2019 7:23:00 AM
Written with real desire. Thoughts into words. It’s perfect.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/12/2019 8:20:00 AM
You got it right! Thank you for visiting
Date: 3/12/2019 7:18:00 AM
Beautifully crafted and definitely poetic in my opinion. And yes, the cadence makes this feel somewhat song-like, singing from the heart. Really nice.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/12/2019 8:13:00 AM
Hi again Chris. Oh, I do appreciate your comments. After I wrote it, I had the same response you song like. Glad you caught that. )) Love, Panagiota
Date: 3/11/2019 7:39:00 PM
Dear Heart! The Reply Button is not responding, Holy Cow! I appreciate your comments, as I wonder at times about my abilities as expressed. Love, Panagiota. This never happened before... Sorry.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2019 10:44:00 AM
Panagiota, it has happened to me too, so I understand your frustration, your talent is beautiful ~
Date: 3/11/2019 5:00:00 PM
Panagiota, oh my gosh what a beautifully penned poem, you have a way with words that I find so amazing, this is a FAV for me ~
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/12/2019 8:09:00 AM
Dear Heart, Oh, a FAV? What an honor. Sometimes I feel I have no way with words.))) So glad you liked it. Thank you. Love, Pangiota I

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