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Heart Shadows Now Keeping Us Apart, Chain Sonnet

Heart Shadows Now Keeping Us Apart, Chain Sonnet (Number two, Debbie's 6/6/6 challenge) Lost treasures, are my heart in disrepair. Disrepair of this longing soul's sweet fair. Fair was my life before she sent her pains. Pains, that wrapped my spirit in blackest stains, stains so dark, our world plunged in decline; Decline blasted our love that was so fine- Fine cuts slashing into my bleeding streams, streams flowing into evil horrid dreams. Dreams hold my future in falling decrees, decrees forcing my last desperate pleas. Pleas of this breaking heart in its last throes, throes of lost love in hard, grief hitting blows. Life once was truth beating in our twin hearts, heart shadows now tearing us into parts. Robert J. Lindley, 2-07-2016 Form- Chain sonnet Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 14 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: Total # Words: 106

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Date: 2/9/2016 10:07:00 AM
Impressive chained sonnet, Robert. Most poetic elements are here, it's such a pleasure to read. Will check out the other one... I'd like to follow your takes on Debbie's new challenge...I could learn a thing or two...all the best!
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