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Heart, Scarred and Pained

"I wear a mask so people won't ask, 'Why are you still grieving?' It's because I want to go on believing that I'll be with my loved ones once more." Quote by poem's author
This wounded heart of mine yearns to retreat into a world where memories beg to entreat the illusion that loved ones I sorrowfully miss will return to share an embrace; a tender kiss. In this imperfect world, where we mortals die, death has darkened my happiness, and I cry for those I've loved and lost. Bereft and torn, I sail on grief's galleon where alone, I mourn. I'll not bare my misery nor tears on my cheek. I wear a mask to disguise that I've become weak. A facade so my tears won't need to be explained and why my broken heart is scarred and pained. I will admit I'm flawed, damaged, and defective. In my mirror I see a face cracked and reflective, but no one knows I cry myself to sleep each night. I keep my emotions well-hidden and out of sight. June 21, 2021 Writing Prompt - Flawed - Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 6/25/2021 4:42:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your excellent poem. Great use of the required words and I like your quote and the image used, love _ Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2021 10:16:00 AM
Thank you. The placement is appreciated.
Date: 6/24/2021 8:36:00 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2021 10:16:00 AM
Thanks, Chris.
Date: 6/23/2021 1:40:00 PM
A tender, sad, emotive write dear Jenna, I foresee this entry as a definite win! Hgs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2021 10:16:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer.
Date: 6/21/2021 2:37:00 PM
Well Jenna you certainly remove the mask in this powerful emotive write, but so many do hide their hurt, behind a stoical veneer, keeping the best side out. Eloquent and excellent as in all your poems, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/23/2021 2:23:00 AM
David, I'm flattered by your generous compliments. Thank you ever so much for liking my poetry. I wear my heart on my sleeve, so a mask would never hide my emotions.
Date: 6/21/2021 10:01:00 AM
I hope this is fiction. I prefer the smile on your avatar. However, you did well and I'm sure you'll get high placement. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/23/2021 2:21:00 AM
Yes, it's just written for the theme of a contest. I'm fine, Victor, and thank you.

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