Heart Power Vs Brain Power (Dedication To John Freeman)

If human brains hold such high capacity
Why is the use of intelligence scanty?
 
Some claim telekinesis and ESP
Are available to them quite readily
 
While others have trouble writing and reading
Is intellect defined in unborn seedlings
 
Pregnant mothers who listen to classic tunes
Say the passion for music grows in their wombs
 
But that can't explain the musical prodigy
Reincarnation gifts -- another theory
 
What roles do genes play? Can talents be bestowed?
Scientists seem focused on genetic codes
 
Talent and genius are enviously measured
By those who have neither such gifts are treasured
 
But the size of our hearts and the joy in our souls
Prove far more precious as a man's life unfolds
 
So much significance is placed on IQ
But our Lord is not apt to ask what we knew
 
When we face final judgment, God just might say
Did you use my gifts wisely or let them decay?
 
Did you use your wisdom for personal gain?
Did the talents I bequeathed bring you great fame?
 
Or did you open your heart, provide relief
To those needing comfort and help with their grief?
 
When you had no money, did you lend a hand?
Did you leave loving footprints across the white sand?
 
Great thinkers and athletes might feel they are blessed
But those who love are heaven's most welcome guests
 
Souls with talent and wealth may not measure up
To one who puts his last coin in a beggar’s tin cup
 
* Dedicated to John Freeman and inspired by his blogs about concepts vs precepts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/30/2011 12:13:00 PM
Very profound write here Carolyn....enjoyed
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:16:00 AM
you can write so so well like i have said in your other writes my friend duncan
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Date: 10/5/2010 10:49:00 AM
SUPER write, Carolyn. My teacher, Walter Eisenberg, started playing the fiddle at age 5. Amazingly, he was able to play several tunes the very first time he picked up a violin. "How do you explain it?" says Walter. "WOW!" says I. Check out Nola Perez''s latest poem. I think she is fabulous. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/2/2010 1:22:00 AM
This is full of wisdom, Carolyn. It is nice to read such depth and understanding. And a very well deserved dedication for John. Joyfully, Dane
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:33:00 AM
Yes, Carolyn, the most greatly blessed are those that bless others' lives with their service and love! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 9/30/2010 2:05:00 PM
Kool dedication to John, he'll be over the moon and humble at the same time >> James
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:33:00 AM
An excellent write and so many questions that give us much food for thought. John's blog has us all thinking. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/29/2010 5:37:00 AM
Great write about debatable subjects...Wisdom is something people get from a relationship with God..Of course, this is my opinion..People can learn, retain facts, and study use the information but there is something about the person who has that relationship with God that seems to give them a well spring of wisdom...Glad that you chose this topic ..Such a honor to John Freeman to use his blog as a springboard about which to write..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2010 12:33:00 PM
great writing about John, richly deserved, thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/28/2010 9:56:00 AM
Absolutely outstanding writing today Carolyn. I truly enjoyed reading this and am adding it to my favorites. Have a wonderful day my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:06:00 PM
I haven't been here long, but I certainly have come to admire John. A wise man with a kind heart. Wish there were more people like him! He deserves this sweet dedication! Diane
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:55:00 PM
Thanks beautiful lady for such an honor of dedication. No not likely will precept need to consult concept on how to build his own house of love! From the heart the gift is provided, and then the mind seeks to own it and claim it glory. Beautiful verse straight from the brilliance of precept love of the heart! I love it and the honorable dedication! May the Agape persona of your precept be blessed with more beautiful precept verse. Agape, You Friend, Moses
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